Help?
So, this is my first time ever doing this, and so far it's going great. It's just, I feel like my story is lacking something. It's about a young girl named Sophia who is a ballerina. When she walks home, she meets a young girl named Hayden. Hayden is homeless and Sophia, feeling bad for the girl, invites her to stay in her house. Sophia then learns that Hayden is blind. Long (and probably cliche) story short, Sophia falls in love with Hayden. But Sophia starts getting mysterious, unsigned letters in the mail, telling her to stay away from Hayden. Sophia starts looking into Hayden's past in an attempt to find out who is sending the letters. When she digs into Hayden's past, she finds out more than she has ever wanted to know.
My synopsis is going to end there because I want the rest to remain a ~secret~
Would it be too much for me to add little snippets of what Sophia's best friend, Travis, is doing? Or should I add flashbacks of Hayden's life? Or should I add nothing at all? Or do you have an idea that I haven't mentioned? Anything would be appreciated. :)
My synopsis is going to end there because I want the rest to remain a ~secret~
Would it be too much for me to add little snippets of what Sophia's best friend, Travis, is doing? Or should I add flashbacks of Hayden's life? Or should I add nothing at all? Or do you have an idea that I haven't mentioned? Anything would be appreciated. :)