Ficathon Entry!!

[lovesrogue36]

Title: To Be Broken
Rating: T/PG-13
Pairing: Corran/Mirax
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A soft tapping against the steel door slowly drew Corran from his sleep. He irritably rolled over, tucking his head beneath a pillow.

“Go away!” he growled, but the visitor persisted. The Corellian pilot sighed in defeat and tossed the covers aside. He stumbled through his room, trying

Comments

[prophetkristy]

Awwww! I'm not much of a Corran fan but I likey! :o)

[lovesrogue36]

Oh good - glad somebody likes it! It's been a REALLY long time since I even wrote anything SW let alone something serious so I was kind of worried.

[virusq]

Wow. That's 1,300 words? It read so fast!

At first, I cringed and was thinking I'd have to ask for more, but ... wow! Isn't that a mark of a good writer, when you don't expect it to end? That's what I love from authors, anyway. The drive to keep reading until it's over and the hunger for more.

It's absolutely awesome! :D

[lovesrogue36]

Yeah... 1335. Cutting it a bit close, I know. It's so nice to hear great feedback - I'm used to the reviews of FF.N. You know, "great" and "keep it up." Not that I haven't resorted to them myself but... :-D And I totally agree - a story that makes you want more is wonderful. Although my personal mark of a great story is if it makes me cry! *sentimental nut*

[virusq]

Ah, well, you know ... I try not to admit I cry. LOL

[lovesrogue36]

LOL. Seriously, my mom and my grandpa and I will cry at just about anything. It's pathetic.

[ladielazarus]

I <3 Corran and Mirax. This was well written. Good Job!

[otahyoni]

Aww. Yay! Good job. :)

[lovesrogue36]

Thanks!

[maramijade]

Huzzah!! Yah coran/Mirax!!!