Ficathon Entry!!

[lovesrogue36]

Title: To Be Broken
Rating: T/PG-13
Pairing: Corran/Mirax
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A soft tapping against the steel door slowly drew Corran from his sleep. He irritably rolled over, tucking his head beneath a pillow.

“Go away!” he growled, but the visitor persisted. The Corellian pilot sighed in defeat and tossed the covers aside. He stumbled through his room, trying

Comments

[virusq]

Wow. That's 1,300 words? It read so fast!

At first, I cringed and was thinking I'd have to ask for more, but ... wow! Isn't that a mark of a good writer, when you don't expect it to end? That's what I love from authors, anyway. The drive to keep reading until it's over and the hunger for more.

It's absolutely awesome! :D

[lovesrogue36]

Yeah... 1335. Cutting it a bit close, I know. It's so nice to hear great feedback - I'm used to the reviews of FF.N. You know, "great" and "keep it up." Not that I haven't resorted to them myself but... :-D And I totally agree - a story that makes you want more is wonderful. Although my personal mark of a great story is if it makes me cry! *sentimental nut*

[virusq]

Ah, well, you know ... I try not to admit I cry. LOL

[lovesrogue36]

LOL. Seriously, my mom and my grandpa and I will cry at just about anything. It's pathetic.

[virusq]

I have always tried to be the tough guy for the family. >_>;

My family decided to go out for a movie night, eons and eons ago. My mom and my sister went to see Everafter (with Drew Barrymore) and my Dad and I went to see Armageddon (with Bruce Willis). My mom and my sister came out of the theater in tears ... and so did my dad.

"Are you crying?"
"..."
"Oh my God! You are crying! No one cries at Bruce Willis movies!"
"It was just so touching! He had to tell his little girl goodbye!"
"Gag."

[lovesrogue36]

Oh that is hilarious! It sounds like a movie or something!