[EXO] [Fanfiction] 我的

[wordyefficacy]

Title: 我的 ([You’re] Mine)
Pairing: Kris-centric, Kris/Chen, OT12
Rating: G
Length: 7,474 words
Summary: Wu Yifan has seen a lot of trainees come and go in his time, but he could never have imagined that he would be so star-struck by Kim Jongdae’s voice (and then slowly, gradually fall for the younger boy in little moments over time). Yifan doesn’t

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[embracelaluna]

ok I'm going to try really hard to actually use English and not just keysmash & cry in your general direction. Let's see how far I make it before i dissolve into tears and sldkfj.

I seriously seriously adore this, your characterization of the boys is incredible, and I loooooove the way that you wrote Kris & Jongdae, they both feel right. Kris kinda can suck at verbalizing emotions and his protectiveness and jealousy and possessiveness let me just cry please ;~; & Jongdae is just a kitten who is super dedicated to singing and exo but when he relaxes he's just all over the place. And of course he's observant and a smart little cookie and would notice things.

I love the way you incorporated moments we know about into the story, them talking about fighting over a girl was adorable enough without throwing this in there.

And Jongdae being all weird in the middle of the night like some odd kitten is kinda perfect & adorable.

/dissolves into keysmashesalsk;dajkdskj;sldkfja/
but seriously lsdkafj;ldkjf laksdjaf;lskj ;lskdjf lkjlsfkddddddfnjtiughorjemkfn
///chenris/// <3