Leaving - Prologue

[wonder_ment]

Something was on his mind, but Wooyoung ignored it and poked Khun’s cheek. “Ya, wake up.”

“Let me sleep a bit longer Wooyoungie.” He licked his lips. What are you trying to do to me?

“Don’t call me that, I don’t like it.”

“But I like it.” Nichkhun rubbed his eyes and sat up. “Your cheeks are red. It’s really hot in this damn classroom, huh?”

Comments

[merely_a_facade]

Toying with my heart right from the get go. I like the angst, surprisingly. I also commend you on your proper usage of punctuation marks :D

[wonder_ment]

LOL THANK YOU, i try~
I'm the copy-editor of my school's yearbook. XD

[merely_a_facade]

Good for you :) Yaye for being part of the yearbook :D I was photo editor & general monkey (aka I did everything for my teacher) for my school's yearbook ;_;

[wonder_ment]

Oh wow, photo editor? You go girl!
I'm going to be in yearbook again for my senior year.
I still mess up from time to time~ I don't catch some small things but I have a partner so it works out.

Thanks for being the first person to ever give me constructive criticism lmao.

[merely_a_facade]

It's good that you have a partner :) You definitely need another person to read over things because your eyes get so tired & you're bound to miss things, especially people's last names x_x

You're welcome :) I just hope that my comments aren't too harsh :)

[wonder_ment]

LMFAO No, they were all within reason. :D

and yeah the names are hard ;_;