(Criminal Minds) - How Soon Is Now? - Chapter Ten (Part Two)

[darkbardzero]

‘’Prentiss!’’

Morgan’s voice echoed loudly, ricocheting around the derelict buildings.  The teams hardhead moved swiftly over the debris from years of neglect, strapped in his FBI vest and pointing his gun in any direction he endeavoured to move in.  As his eyes scanned the area, his ears straining to hear anything, he scowled as the blood pumped

Comments

[katy1630]

WOW, not sure if i have reviewed this yet but i have been avidly reading and this is by far your best update yet. amazing writing and incredibly moving. well done :)

oh and as a side line i could tell that ur from england from the one line 'built like a brick shit house' as im not sure its an americanism lol made me giggle (im from the uk incase u were wondering)

[darkbardzero]

Thank you, I really appreciate that. And also glad you enjoyed the update, was a tad worried about it myself! So ta muchly.

Another UK chick? Yey! Lol, yeah I hadn't actually realised I had put that in there, but I guess I just can't hide it, they just slip out sometimes! But let's face it, we have some classy sayings, don't we?!

[katy1630]

lol it always makes me happy to read fics written by brits :D....and i dont think classy is what i would use to describe british sayings mostly we just drink alot of tea and moan about the weather

[darkbardzero]

TEA! OMG how I looooove tea, I must drink a gallon of it a day! And I bitch about the weather, it's so true :D I get up at 6:30am for school, so I feel I have the right to grumble whilst I freeze my ass off at the bus stop!

[aeryn_27]

wow. go emily. hotchner is an ass anyway.

this just keeps getting better and better...

[darkbardzero]

Lol, thank you :D I do like Hotch, I don't usually make him the bad guy. Just needed him to be this chapter to move things along!

[darkbardzero]

Really? Aww, pet I didn't mean to make you cry. But thank you, so much.

[darkbardzero]

I'm sure you would be sweetheart, and I'm glad I could provide something to make you feel better even a smidgen through writing. Drop me a line anytime if you'd like to :)

[lena_fan]

I love this series so much, it's amazing.
I'm a uk girl too, and I have to say that I also love tea and moaning about the bloody crap weather, btw I too love marmite!!!
You either love it or hate it like the advert says lol.
xxx

[katy1630]

hahaha marmite rocks! i dont see how people dont like it :D

[lena_fan]

Ha ha, my partner hates it, which makes me love it even more lol!!!
xxx

[elekanahmen]

i got home at 2:30am from san francisco this morning... and I dove right in and read these chapters (this chapter?) because i've been so looking forward to them...

these were so emotional and raw and amazing and it just cements in my mind how amazing you are. don't stop! ♥