(Criminal Minds) - How Soon Is Now? - Chapter Ten (Part Two)

[darkbardzero]

‘’Prentiss!’’

Morgan’s voice echoed loudly, ricocheting around the derelict buildings.  The teams hardhead moved swiftly over the debris from years of neglect, strapped in his FBI vest and pointing his gun in any direction he endeavoured to move in.  As his eyes scanned the area, his ears straining to hear anything, he scowled as the blood pumped

Comments

[katy1630]

WOW, not sure if i have reviewed this yet but i have been avidly reading and this is by far your best update yet. amazing writing and incredibly moving. well done :)

oh and as a side line i could tell that ur from england from the one line 'built like a brick shit house' as im not sure its an americanism lol made me giggle (im from the uk incase u were wondering)

[darkbardzero]

Thank you, I really appreciate that. And also glad you enjoyed the update, was a tad worried about it myself! So ta muchly.

Another UK chick? Yey! Lol, yeah I hadn't actually realised I had put that in there, but I guess I just can't hide it, they just slip out sometimes! But let's face it, we have some classy sayings, don't we?!

[katy1630]

lol it always makes me happy to read fics written by brits :D....and i dont think classy is what i would use to describe british sayings mostly we just drink alot of tea and moan about the weather

[darkbardzero]

TEA! OMG how I looooove tea, I must drink a gallon of it a day! And I bitch about the weather, it's so true :D I get up at 6:30am for school, so I feel I have the right to grumble whilst I freeze my ass off at the bus stop!

[katy1630]

hahaha i too love tea, its almost compulsory if ur from england.

we have every right to moan at the weather as our summer consisted of about a week of semi good weather and now its back to being freaking freezing!

im so glad im not at uni ne more...my house had no heating for a whole year and i virtually lived on hot drinks, toast and marmite and wore at least three layers around the house! but i loved it :D

[darkbardzero]

Lmao, you're a trooper! But marmite? Really? No no! Yeah our summer was fricking shite. And all I really wanted was a week, just one week without rain or cloud or cold fronts, for Download. Bloody typical!

[katy1630]

OMG! u went to download? no way! i missed this year because i couldn't afford it i was well annoyed! the year before i was wasted for 4days it was so much fun, altho a hangover in a tent when its that hot is not fun.

im still gutted i didnt go to a festival this yr, kinda sucks

[darkbardzero]

Hey, I was there last year too! It ROCKED! Lol, yeah being hungover in that heat, especially when the tents boil you alive isn't grand!

I hate missing festivals too, it's wank.