Fic: Umbrella (or Cry Part 2)

[sophies_remedy]

  Title: Umbrella (or Cry Part 2)
Author: Sophie
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Pairing: Emily/JJ
Rating: PG for one (maybe two?) cuss word
Disclaimer: I don't own jack- including the Rihanna lyrics
Spoilers/warnings: spoilers for 3.17 In Heat
Author’s notes: Thanks to Sofia_Lindsay for the beta.

Suspecting that Will is on the other side of the door, you brace one

Comments

[steppenwolf_20]

Oh YES!!!! another favorable plot line how to get rid of Crawfish!!

I really liked the choice of words. It's so typical.

“I’m afraid this person doesn’t feel the same way,” you tell her. “And I’m afraid that if I tell them how I feel I’ll lose the friendship that we have.”
At first JJ is very non-descript.

Emily automatically assumes it's another he.
“What makes you think that he won’t feel the same way?”

And then JJ finally comes out:
“Because she was the one who told me that Will and I would be good together,”

Very well done!!

[sophies_remedy]

Thank you!

[sofia_lindsay]

“Are you saying what I think you’re saying?”
*sighs* To be such a smart woman, one would think Emily lives under a rock!

And this is what I want to see happen in Season 4!! Make it happen, please? *g*

[sophies_remedy]

haha, I'll try, but I'm not sure I can get close enough to anyone from the show to bribe them.

[darkbardzero]

That was so good, thank you. I love your writing, and everything was so clear. And I too really enjoyed the word play. Oh oh, and maybe we could all band together, stalk and kidnap the writers and MAKE them write what we want?!!!

[sophies_remedy]

hmm, kidnapping could be good.

Step 1: find a lair to stash writers

Any ideas?