Fic. Childish Things
Title: Childish Things
Author: alicebluegown16
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing: Will/Finn, Puck, OFC, Puck/OFC, and Melody (my Will/Finn spawn)
Summary: In which there is accidental matchmaking and a general failure on everyone's part to act like adults.
AN: Part of my series. The OFC (Ellie) was introduced in my story Assumptions. In my head I picture ( Read more... )
The thing about Finn not knowing how to deal with things is so heartbreaking, and I can't help but feel sorry for him instead of be angry at him. I don't know if that's bad or not. Just as I was thinking that Finn is grown up and the evidence of the age gap is virtually gone, we're reminded that Finn has a lot of growing up to do, and Will still has to be the adult sometimes.
Tina's rant, oh my god, I loved it. You and your sweater vest sex magic. So epic. xD It almost makes me wish I liked straight sex cos then I could read Tina/Artie fics. *digressing*
I love how your stories exploit the glee universe to it's fullest. It's filled with references to Emma and Max and Kurt and past events and all that jazz, which makes it so much more interesting and fleshes it all out awesomely. I'm kind of loving how this is turning into an ensemble fic a little bit. In a sea of stories that focus on only two people, it's refreshing to read a story where there are lots of people in this couple's life, and they're not forgotten about just because the couple is the focus, and the other people can be utilised to explore things about the couple. It's pretty cool.
Plus, the Will/Finn fighting was kind of cool (probably not the right word), since it was a totally different dynamic to the Puck/Finn fight. Like you said, it was more passive-agressive and not as explosive as with Puck, since there's more of a guarantee that despite the fight there's still going to stick together. I dunno, I thought the difference was interesting.
I don't know how I always end up reading your fics at some ridiculous time at night (2am) but I think I should blame that for my epic ranty comments. jsyk. As usual, this was fantastic, and full of winn. <3
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Writing well meaning asshole Finn was kind of fun, he was getting a little to emotionally aware for my taste. Plus passive aggressive married people fighting is awesome.
Glad you liked the ensemble nature and Tina, whose rant may or may not have been based on something my aunt said when she was pregnant with my cousin.
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