Crazy - Buffy (Anya/Xander)

[willowwood]

Hey All
I know i haven't been on here for absolutely agggeeesss and it's probably really shameless of me to just come on and plug my new story lol but i don't care. I've been really busy with work and other bits and bobs so haven't really had chance to do anything that i really wanna. Hopefully might get some time in the near future to come on and

Comments

[spikesnn]

Hiya Wil...your life sounds crazily hectic at the mo

Loved the story..it would have made a great ending to the original ep

*hugs*

[willowwood]

Yeah been doing everything other than having the chance to write no matter how much my muse keeps hounding me. Glad you liked it :D.

[semby]

Awww, that was very well done. I think this is great characterization of Anya: you've really got her despair here, and I like the little touch of her wondering if Xander saw the dress beforehand, bringing bad luck which made the wedding fall apart. I also love that Xander had a country CD in the stereo :)

I think that this could do with a beta, though, for a couple little grammar things - just commas, really. But it is really nicely done, nice take on the aftereffects of the wedding, and nice lead up to D'Hoffryn's appearance and proposition at the end.

Good to see you on LJ again :)

[willowwood]

Thanks alot, really glad you liked it. I agree on the whole Beta thing, the closest this got to being Betad was being read by my Mom lol, so i'm not surprised theirs a few problems.

[pokerkitten]

I thought she looked gorgeous in that dress.

This ep is one of the many reasons I really dislike Xander...

[willowwood]

Oh me too. Hells Bells is so sad, and Xander really could be an ass sometimes.