[sunday_reveries] i'm terrified i can't fix this. that this is just who i am.
[Companion piece to this fic right here. Possibly triggering content, there is no happiness here; totally, totally AU.]
( i saw you crawling on the floor )
( i saw you crawling on the floor )
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FWAUGH
omfg that is
this was so beautiful. It was so poetic and so painful and so aughhhhh agh. I love that it started and ended with almost the same thing with her talking about her dreams. >Comparing the first section to the last section, it's like all the proof that anyone would need of how much they went through. THERE IS SO MUCH DIFFERENCE in her, in the situation, in the dream itself, and it is a beautiful, intense way to show what they're going through ( ... )
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I AM SO HAPPY YOU LIKED IT. ;__;
LMFAO, I was so terrified of actually giving Lucky dialogue and deciding how Sonny would react/proceed when it came to... everything that happened to them that week but YOU WERE RIGHT WHEN YOU SAID WRITING THEM SO LATE MEANS YOU'RE TOO TIRED TO CARE.
Not that I didn't care but the terror was less, though I still hope they were... okay because they are not my characters and, you know. I wanted to do them justice. :x
>< /CLINGS FOR THE BLEEDOVER yeah it was hard to write esp since everyone was just loud, both the saints and the crowbar and fffff ._.
Gwah, yeah it'd be the beginning of the end for sure. I can't see them bouncing back either, and... yeah, finding Lucky at the parlor would be the snapping point. There'd be no coming back from that ever. asldfjka >I WOULD NOT HAVE BEEN ABLE TO WRITE THIS IF I DIDN'T HAVE YOUR FIC TO WORK WITH SO TY FOR THAT TOO. ;__ ( ... )
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