Echo of Dusk - Chapter IX

Mar 03, 2008 11:18

Title: Echo of Dusk
Author: wild_terrain (ie. fi_chan)
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jaeho, echo of dusk

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iaminlalaland March 3 2008, 01:42:37 UTC
ooooohhhhhh nnnnooooo wwwwwaaaaaayyyyy!!!!

I am first??!!!??

O.O

Will be back with my book long comment, gotta read first, lol

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wild_terrain March 3 2008, 01:46:50 UTC
LOL Noooo wayyyyyy!! My philosopher is no.1!! XD

I'll also be back with my long comment in regards to your long comment in the last chapter... wow say that 10 times really fast XD

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sly_pantera March 3 2008, 02:03:40 UTC
EEK! SPOT!!!

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sly_pantera March 3 2008, 02:32:49 UTC
OHEMGEE. x______x Oh, Jae buns. *snuggles* You poor thing. *cries*

On another note, are YooSuMin going to be in this fic?

Can't wait for the next part! ^^

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wild_terrain March 5 2008, 08:23:16 UTC
Omg I have time to reply to people in uni! The miracles!!! :D

hehe jae buns sound so cute XD

Ahhh yes the gang. Indeed they will be :D. Su and Yoochun will feature in the post-war part...Yoochun even more so.
Min...oh poor Minnie. Yunho really despises him in this fic...but yes he does come back for a brief(?) appearance. Well, unless I change my mind when I'm actually writing...damn my mind and its easily distracted nature! XD

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iaminlalaland March 3 2008, 02:21:27 UTC
Oh dear that was lovely to read. Now I want the next chappie so bad. Jae finally realized the monster that is lurking and so the journey to conquer it begins. Now that Jae can say all his fear out loud, woudn't it be great if Yunho was eavesdropping and hear Jae's fear, thus enabling him to help Jae in this war with his own demon. It suck a big one of to so fearful of your surrounding, and I think Jae's biggest fear right now, even more than the sudden attack of the enemy, is losing Yunho because he deemed himself tainted and no longer good enough for Yunho. With the way Jae is feeling, Yunho needs to put his wit to good use and convince Jae that he will always be there for Jae ( ... )

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iaminlalaland March 3 2008, 02:41:52 UTC
after posting the that comment I realized I fail to make it as long as I did as I usually did. Sorry to disappoint dear, but I was trying NOT to be rude to the person behind me and cut you short. I am terribly sorry ( ... )

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wild_terrain March 5 2008, 09:30:22 UTC
Okay I have activated my serious mode.

I realized I fail to make it as long as I did as I usually did.
No no no, don't stress. If you happen to give a 'book length' comment, then it's lucky for me. But if it's not a 'book length' comment then that's fine too *huggle* ^^

and saying that he doesn't mind sleeping on the floor is in no way easing Jea's fear but reinforcing Jae's though of Yunho doesn't want him anymore
Spoken like a true philosopher. It's really ironic isn't it! Even though JaeJoong probably doesn't mind the fact that YH's sleeping on the floor because it means he won't accidentally mistake YH for a rapist in the night ^^;;, in his subconscious it's probably painting the illusion that YH + floor = definitely isn't wanting to be a lover with him. Emotions are so complicated T_T

Yes indeed our stubborn beauty physically push his love away, but more than anything, he wants Yunho to oppose to that.Brilliantly written. Applause! I love it. JaeJoong is definitely lost and feeling so much contrast - 'Push YH away for both our ( ... )

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wild_terrain March 5 2008, 08:58:57 UTC
My philosopherrrr, my loveeee <333 haha

and so the journey to conquer it begins
tee heeee, great visuals being produced in my tired, psychotic mind right now. Like of JaeJoong in a suit of armor, yielding a sexy sword and preparing the fight the even dragon in order to rescue Princess Fiona. (LOLL i did not just make a Shrek reference NOR did i use it because of my own name XDD <--lies!!)

Now that Jae can say all his fear out loud, woudn't it be great if Yunho was eavesdropping and hear Jae's fear
Oiiii, they can't take the easy way out :D:D:D. But yeh... it would certainly solve a lot of the problems more quickly. But think about how NICE it will be for Yunho to find it out from JaeJoong's own mouth because he completely trusts Yunnie! *melts* XD

I think Jae's biggest fear right now, even more than the sudden attack of the enemy, is losing Yunho
hehe, great picking up on that.

With the way Jae is feeling, Yunho needs to put his wit to good use
WIT TO GOOD USE!! NICE ONE!!!! *tries to stop giggling*

I think Yunnie needs a lesson ( ... )

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joongielover March 3 2008, 02:50:07 UTC
I have to say, I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Hankyung in this. He's just LOVEEEEEEEEEEE <3. I literally fall on my ass laughing whenever Hankyung is there :D.

LOL, JAEJOONG AND THE PILLOW; AND MINWOO!
GBFUBGKF. That sceen was hilarious~

But gahh~ The whole argument with Jaejoong and Yunho T_T.
Joongie~ Yunho will make it better~~~

♥ the update <3~

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wild_terrain March 5 2008, 08:28:02 UTC
hahahah yeh I never anticipated that Hangeng would be so popular XD.
He'll be pleased to know he made you laugh. I'll go tell him... LOL i wish.

hehehe the pillow scene! Talk about late-night inspiration! JaeJoong and his incoherent brain XD

T_T mmm, and it was their first major fight as well. Poor JaeHo...

Wish me luck with finishing the next chapter~~ >D

Thanks for reading!! <33

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wh1tel1ly March 3 2008, 02:56:14 UTC
OMO Joongie, you re so desperate..
Jealous… He absolutely Jealous..

Ahhh, here they come.. YunJae first fight..
As quick as it come that just gone.. I like it, when they cann’t manage long fight..
Joongie just feel so insecure YunHo, he need time n love. And I believe YunHo love will cheers him soon..

Angel Hangeng as always, come take care of Our Lovely YunJae..

Love it as always, I’ll wait your Promising for next chapie..
Please come soon..

<3333

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wild_terrain March 5 2008, 08:31:53 UTC
yo~~

*nod nod* Jealous indeed! Wow I think it's even the first time that JaeJoong + Jealousy has ever been shown in the fic XD.

Yes their first fight T_T. LOLLL yes they can't even fight for long! True love :D

Joongie just feel so insecure YunHo, he need time n love.
Mmmmm!! Exactly right! Well said. ^^

I’ll wait your Promising for next chapie.
Heheh, I'll work extra hard to write! :D

Thanks for always reading! <33

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wh1tel1ly March 5 2008, 09:05:24 UTC
^_____^

Thanks for work extra hard to write this..
Please do it safely ^___^

<333

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