Echo of Dusk - Chapter IV

Jan 18, 2008 23:11

Title: Echo of Dusk
Author: wild_terrain (ie. fi_chan)
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jaeho, echo of dusk

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sexineko January 18 2008, 13:17:21 UTC
spot?

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sexineko January 18 2008, 13:17:48 UTC
hehehe MINNNNE♥

*runs off to read*

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sexineko January 18 2008, 14:06:03 UTC
adsjakdjsakldjaldja *dies*

So Yunho doing the dirty thinking of Jae was just.. ajdskadjkal, really hot and kinda sad at the same time. You could feel his desperation, of wanting Jae. Being away from someone who you dont know that long, is confusing and a really long period of time. i used to hate it when my bf would go up to college, since when he first went up we were only together for three months so it was all confusion.

When Yunho said no to the prostitute I jumped for joy and i was so happy that Yunho was loyal. Of course i didnt expect anything else from him but you made all of us readers see just how dedicated he is to JaeJoong.

Even if the progress is slow i think its going nicely. rushing it just wouldn't be right and you wouldnt get this kind of characterization. gah i love your writing.

I closed my eyes tightly as the wrist muffling my panting began to muffle a new sound - the sound of my sobbing. I knew this wasn’t real. I wasn’t making love with my beloved JaeJoongie… He wasn’t really here, withering under me ( ... )

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wild_terrain January 20 2008, 11:47:00 UTC
MY TWIN GETS NO.1!!! YAYYYY!!! *throws streamers* hahahha!

So Yunho doing the dirty thinking of Jae was just.. ajdskadjkal, really hot and kinda sad at the same time. You could feel his desperation, of wanting Jae.
EXCCCELLENT to hear...bwahaha, my work is a success then XD. Dirty Yunho is such a neccessity LOLS! But yeh, glad you felt the sadness that came with all that...T_T

i used to hate it when my bf would go up to college, since when he first went up we were only together for three months so it was all confusion.
Ahhh you poor thing! I don't blame you! I've had a bf once...and let's not go into how much THAT sucked haha!

When Yunho said no to the prostitute I jumped for joy and i was so happy that Yunho was loyal. Of course i didnt expect anything else from him but you made all of us readers see just how dedicated he is to JaeJoong.
Ahh you figured out my main motive for including all that :D. Mm, Yunho has to be loyal otherwise I'd be quite sad and disappointed~.

Even if the progress is slow i think its going nicely. ( ... )

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sly_pantera January 18 2008, 13:50:33 UTC
Spot! Might have to read after school! XO

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sly_pantera January 18 2008, 14:00:10 UTC
EEK, I couldn't resist! =____= Yes, Yunho, find Jaejoong! I'm glad Yunho turned down the prostitute! He's still so very loyal to Jaejoong. ♥ Loved this chapter! Can't wait for the next! Now I have to leave! D:

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wild_terrain January 20 2008, 11:40:28 UTC
helllllo there XD.

Man, you are too funny. I always succumb to temptation as well XD.

Hope you weren't late for school~...

So awesome to hear you loved this chapter as well! MUCH LOVE! <3

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irerd_taga January 18 2008, 13:55:36 UTC
Yunho's on his way to rescue Jae!!! Yippee!!!

He sure is a compassionate man eh! And he's being rewarded by getting a guide in return for that said compassion. Just hope that she doesn't betray them.

Hang in there Jae! Yunho's coming!

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wild_terrain January 20 2008, 11:38:37 UTC
hi hi ^_^

Yunho's on his way to rescue Jae!!! Yippee!!!
YAYYY he is indeed! *starts dancing around* hahaha.

Mmm, his compassion sure was rewarded! AH Yunho, so noble...so smexy... be stillll my heart! XD

O_O Yes, let's hope they aren't betrayed. That would cause some difficulty...

Thanks so much for reading! <3

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a_azarine January 18 2008, 14:31:12 UTC
heyya fi_chan ^^! had a nice holiday?
gosh, I miss several chapters and read straight away from chapter one xp

I like this story more now. first, you explore an unusual theme aka korean historic war which I don't read a lot, so you kinda give me a slight insight of it. second, I like how the story flows, and I think it's okay if it's a bit slow as long as you can build the characterization better. third, I love how you portray Yunho (and I found his intimate memories being the one that he keep the most is interesting too) in this chapter, cos it seems realistic to me. and yes, him being a horny bugger is a big no-no :D

how long did you do the research about war before you write this? I'm just curious :)

until now it's well done hon! keep up the good work. I'm curious about Jae's state now, can't wait for the next chap ^^
~found some typos, but who didn't do it when someone is tired? ::grins::

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wild_terrain January 20 2008, 11:35:36 UTC
hey!! Welcome back hahah!!

Mmm, holiday was excellent...no pc for a week = forced to write four new chapters HAHA!

Ahh your comment is too awesome for words! I'm really touched that you like this so much! T_T

I think it's okay if it's a bit slow as long as you can build the characterization better
KYAA, thanks so much! That's a relief, coz I can understand how the wait would be frustrating for readers ^^;;

him being a horny bugger
Bwahaha! Couldn't help but giggle there, that was the perfect description. XDDD

how long did you do the research about war before you write this? I'm just curious :)
I studied history for five years in highschool so I already knew the nitty gritty parts. We only briefly touched on the Korea War (in a cold war context) when I was in my last year so I maybe spent a day or two when I was on break reading a bit more about it ^^

~found some typos, but who didn't do it when someone is tired? ::grins::
hahha, yes...quite inevitable T_T. My bad. Glad I'm forgiven :P

Thanks so much for reading! <3

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chloe1910 January 18 2008, 15:50:59 UTC
I love this chapter!! Unlike those North Korean bastards (sorry..no pun intended), at least Yunho showed humanity and kindness to the prostitute! Of course, the prostitute is bringing them to the POW, but she was treated fairly and with dignity...not as a lowly prostitute...

Hang On Jae...Yunho is coming!

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wild_terrain January 20 2008, 11:28:13 UTC
tee hee, thanks so much! <3

at least Yunho showed humanity and kindness to the prostitute!
Ahhh I knowwww, I'm so proud of you Yunho XD.

Indeed Jae-baby, Yunho will be coming 'round the mountain! (omg sorry, I loved that song when I was a kid :P)

Thanks for reading~

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chloe1910 January 20 2008, 11:43:04 UTC
Oh Yeah! Heard you had food poisoning I hope you're all ok now!!take care ok..

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wild_terrain January 20 2008, 11:55:01 UTC
haha thanks XD

but OMG yes O_O I'm still queasy. I hadn't vomited since 8 years-ago so it kind of sucked.
I had my friend over when it stuck...we had just finished laughing at Together PV...so I dnt know whether to blame the Chinatown dumplings or the scary cartoon action XD

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