Echo of Dusk - Chapter IV

Jan 18, 2008 23:11

Title: Echo of Dusk
Author: wild_terrain (ie. fi_chan)
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jaeho, echo of dusk

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sexineko January 18 2008, 13:17:21 UTC
spot?

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sexineko January 18 2008, 13:17:48 UTC
hehehe MINNNNE♥

*runs off to read*

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sexineko January 18 2008, 14:06:03 UTC
adsjakdjsakldjaldja *dies*

So Yunho doing the dirty thinking of Jae was just.. ajdskadjkal, really hot and kinda sad at the same time. You could feel his desperation, of wanting Jae. Being away from someone who you dont know that long, is confusing and a really long period of time. i used to hate it when my bf would go up to college, since when he first went up we were only together for three months so it was all confusion.

When Yunho said no to the prostitute I jumped for joy and i was so happy that Yunho was loyal. Of course i didnt expect anything else from him but you made all of us readers see just how dedicated he is to JaeJoong.

Even if the progress is slow i think its going nicely. rushing it just wouldn't be right and you wouldnt get this kind of characterization. gah i love your writing.

I closed my eyes tightly as the wrist muffling my panting began to muffle a new sound - the sound of my sobbing. I knew this wasn’t real. I wasn’t making love with my beloved JaeJoongie… He wasn’t really here, withering under me ( ... )

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wild_terrain January 20 2008, 11:47:00 UTC
MY TWIN GETS NO.1!!! YAYYYY!!! *throws streamers* hahahha!

So Yunho doing the dirty thinking of Jae was just.. ajdskadjkal, really hot and kinda sad at the same time. You could feel his desperation, of wanting Jae.
EXCCCELLENT to hear...bwahaha, my work is a success then XD. Dirty Yunho is such a neccessity LOLS! But yeh, glad you felt the sadness that came with all that...T_T

i used to hate it when my bf would go up to college, since when he first went up we were only together for three months so it was all confusion.
Ahhh you poor thing! I don't blame you! I've had a bf once...and let's not go into how much THAT sucked haha!

When Yunho said no to the prostitute I jumped for joy and i was so happy that Yunho was loyal. Of course i didnt expect anything else from him but you made all of us readers see just how dedicated he is to JaeJoong.
Ahh you figured out my main motive for including all that :D. Mm, Yunho has to be loyal otherwise I'd be quite sad and disappointed~.

Even if the progress is slow i think its going nicely. ( ... )

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sexineko January 21 2008, 09:59:29 UTC
*tackles* twin~ hello hello♥

seriously, i wish i could write like you. *pout*

I recently read a story about how Yunho used Jae for sex and Chun was evil in this too and in the end they got arrested or something. >.< that just made m angry and gah. i dont like that much angst in my stories, unless its from my favorite authors or you, my twin of course. ^^

Of course i see your logic. If you rushed this it'd just be a bit weird. The whole process of getting Jae back and see Yunho's feeling and dedication is what makes us all go "awwww" and turn in to a pile of mush.

hmmm i love reading your replys. i do love a long, ramble-y comment myself. ^^ XDDD

always a pleasure♥

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wild_terrain January 21 2008, 11:17:54 UTC
yes yes, mutual feelings from over here as well ^___^ (no duh)

Kyaa, it's so interesting to hear readers POVs like this...I get so wrapped up in the fic I can only know what I feel when I write it, making me heavily biased when it comes to someone else just reading it. So glad the mush is working HAHHAH!!

Wow yeh, that plot sounds a tad extreme ^^;;
It's sometimes so hard to find a good median in fics I find...for example sometimes you need a little bit of angst...but then sometimes you see so much of it that it's coming out of your ears and you don't know what to do with it all and before you know it you're going crazy @_@.
But then again...I suppose there's this small (lol only small?!) masochistic side of myself that loves angst because only then are your emotions really activated and you can FEEL the storyline. Of course too much angst just makes you want to commit suicide for a moment HAHHA jk...

LMAO this wouldn't be a traditional comment if it didn't have the associated ramble XD *peace sigh*

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sexineko January 21 2008, 12:12:52 UTC
Hmmm i agree. I love hearing replys from people and seeing what they think. when they say however, they wish to write like me, i just go, huh? cause im not that good and still trying to find my style.

hahaha, how true. finding a median for anything is hard, and all us Jaeho/Yunjae fans are mascochistic. They just scream drama, angst and love.

ah, i just finished talking with another author and she believes in the whole, if theyre beautiful and fragile looking, they should be uke's and honestly, that really bothers me. Like the whole "support the lesbians" thing on Jaesu. >.< just cause they're both protrayed as Uke's suddenly they're women? Honestly, people really make me mad. i dont see how noone can see the masculine side of Jae. hes strong, stronger that Yunho in some ways. hes such an awesome seme. >.<

okay so.. i kinda ranted my frustration towards you, *sheepish smile*. didnt mean to. i've just recently read alot of stories on how fragile and weak Jae is. kinda got to me.

♥♥ *waves*

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wild_terrain January 21 2008, 12:46:27 UTC
THIS IS SO FUNNY coz I've been away for a week on that holiday and was watching up on the stuff I missed in JaeHo_YWH community and I JUST read that whole "jae is total uke vs yunho total seme" debate in fanficion topic...so I'm feeling all my own thoughts on that too! Great timing, twin! :D ( ... )

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sexineko January 21 2008, 21:08:51 UTC
LOLL Yess being away from the Jaeho community, lots of things happen in your absence. Haha I remember, and i got a visual of his arms when i did.

*sighs* it just really annoys me that people make Jae out so weak cause he's not. I think sometimes people really dont support the idea of two guys but rather they support a "girly" jae and a manly Yunho. *shrug* i could be wrong but its the vibe i get alot of times.

Hmm I dont think alot of people really think their characters characteristics through. Like all the stories that have Jae as a girl, that annoys me to no end. I have managed though, to change my seme!ho friend to my seme!jae friend now. She's all for seme!jae now cause she kept reading my stories and i managed to convert her. XDDDDDDDD

I knooow, ranting is good, i had noone to rant to cause i havent been able to talk to my friend. <333333333 good i dont want to have to worry bout offending anyone.

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wild_terrain January 22 2008, 07:51:50 UTC
OMG I knowww T_T...I havent even ATTEMPTED DBSG community...I'm going to be held captive by my PC for the next week it seems ^^;;

Ahh yes...I get ya. Trying to mold JaeHo into your typical hetero storyline using mass stereotyping... it seems that way, hey. Maybe people just aren't used to homosexuals? They love them but don't quite understand how they act or how their relationship dynamics can differ from het couples. That's the only thing I can think of @_@...unless woman!jae and man!yunho is the only thing that turns them on LOL.

Good job with the converting!!! Jae!Seme is so awesome. He has so much 'pay attention to me and do as I say' vibes in many clips eh! Plus Yunho's always a sucker for JJ lets JJ do whatever he pleases (eg. JJ always interupting in interviews LOL)...seems pretty Seme to me MUAHAHH! *loves JaeJooooooong*

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sexineko January 22 2008, 08:13:17 UTC
haha well whatever floats your boat i guess. YESSSS kudos to me~ but she got me in to Jaesu also so i guess its a fair trade. Yupp, Yunho is such a sucker for Jae, we all know how big of a sucker he is. XDDDDDD

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