I finally worked on my story a bit. Completed chapter one and changed small things in the prologue. I made a new live journal just for the story. add it. spread the word. i dont care if i know them, like them or what. I want people to read it and tell how horrible a writer i am. If it is someone that is just gonna say it is good to be nice then forget them. I want real people. the link is here
http://www.livejournal.com/~elhazzared/