The Other Side of the Clouds (2/2)

[wh_mermaid]

Comments

[luxover]

I don't even have to read this to know my reaction is going to be:

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

followed by:

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

followed by:

<3______________<3

but I'm gonna read it anyways.

brb

[wh_mermaid]

Bwuahahahahahaa I love you. BTW I don't remember who it was but the other day someone tweeted "When he was a child, Kasey Keller was neither big or tall but was then bitten by a radioactive wall" and I died laughing and thought of you <3

[luxover]

this comment should have happened a million years ago and for that i am forever and eternally sorry, but here goes anyways, better late than never

[ascmama_duck]

Lux expressed everything I think about this fic better than I ever could, so I'll just say ditto and I love you and you're awesome and this is the cutest thing ever.
And, because it bears repeating, Erik saying he likes how Roger pulls his hair is so hot even though it's totally non-sexual :)

[justkisa]

I don't really have any idea who these people are but this was really awesome and sweet and just, really amazing - it made me smile

[wh_mermaid]

Thank you :D

[vera_dicere]

AAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! que precioso, querida!!

such cute, I can't even handle it!! I love the awkward-shyness of Erik and Roger's goofy hipster personality (beer from a brewery that no one's heard of, nice). you know I'm not super into RPS, but this was adorable! ♥

(one typo I noticed: when Roger comes home and Erik is waiting on the stairs, Erik stands and brushes "dust and dirty" from his jeans...)

[wh_mermaid]

Fixed!

Querida!!!!! Thank you for commenting <3 I still have those postcards to send you ^^; I'll get around to it sooner or later

[driedstardono]

They. Are. So. Sweet.

Erik is precious and Roger is adorable and I love the team dynamic that you wrote in! Giggles and Sparkles are probably my favorite :)

Argh. Damn the addictive colorfulness of the Sounders. Maybe I'll have to pay more attention to them :/

[wh_mermaid]

\o/

Yes! Pay more attention to them. I think we're playing Herediano tomorrow and it's going to be on FSC.... aka I'll be streaming it on my computer -___-

Thank you for commenting ^_^

[katiebooth1983]

I kinda know who these guys are as i do watch MLS when its on. After reading you OTP post i was convinced that i needed to read this fic. So i did. And it is awesome!

I love how Erik was so oblivious to the whole thing. Roger is a absolute sweetheart. Nice cameo from Anton too.

Great stuff hun. I really enjoyed it!

♥

[wh_mermaid]

Yay I'm glad you read ^_^ I was like '... no one is going to read this because everyone will be like mls no1curr' but I'm sooooo glad people are.

Thank you for commenting <3