FIC: The Proposition: A (Slightly) Inappropriate Love Story (8/?)

[wewrite_stuff]

TITLE: The Proposition: A (Slightly) Inappropriate Love Story
AUTHORS: Gleekilicious & Tessisamess
PAIRING: Kurtofsky
RATING: Will hit NC17
WORD COUNT: 4,717 // 28,581
SPOILERS: None; AU-fic
WARNINGS: Teacher/Student
SUMMARY: Kurt's pretty sure nothing sucks worse than being the only gay kid in the changing rooms. It's hell but he does a damn good

Comments

[caliena]

Commenting while reading, just a warning!

"Tastes like ass and not in the good way."
Oh, DAVE, way to be... seductive :D

And the picture is SO awesome, Dave looks so... caring? Adoring? Soft? Dunno, just: WOW!

"this is like trying to get into Alcatraz...!" *bursts out laughing*

The books are an AWESOME present *feels all warm and fuzzy inside*

Does any of the two notice they are having DATES all the time? :D

Also; swallowing is a great gift *bursts out laughing again*

I like that Kurt won. Obvious reasons, of course, but also because Dave was right: He NEEDS a solo from time to time :)

...
I am guessing Dave won't be singing at the venue...
Just... gives me the wrong vibe here.

Loved this chapter, can't wait for the next :)

[wewrite_stuff]

:D Thank you for the awesome comment! I love reading comment-as-you-read reviews; idk why.

Does any of the two notice they are having DATES all the time?
That seriously made me giggle. ♥

I am guessing Dave won't be singing at the venue...
Just... gives me the wrong vibe here.
Guess you'll just have to wait and see! But I am curious as to why it gives you the wrong vibe?

[caliena]

Glad to make you happy :)

I don't really know!
First, I don't see why Dave should have the Flyer when it's his own concert.
Than, why doesn't he miss it, only Kurt could have taken it after all.
And then...
I don't know, maybe it's just the way I would write it: Kurt and Mercedes being there, waiting for Dave's band, who isn't there, maybe getting into trouble and THEN meeting Dave who's just there to listen himself (and for the party) who helps them out...
*flails around helplessly*
I just don't know, I just think it would be too easy if it were Dave's band.

[wewrite_stuff]

I suppose it would be too easy --if the band were a large part of the plot. But it's not, really. As for why he had his own flyer:

When I was in high school I had this bangin' hot ceramics teacher, Heather, and she was in a band (played keyboard). Anyway, we were talking one day and she had a flyer up on her corkboard next to a picture of her husband and it was for a show they were playing. 'Course, when she said I could come since it was close to the school I couldn't since I was 16 at the time, but it was a nice offer.

Anyway, I went to an art school and there were a lot of people in bands there, both students and teachers, and it wasn't uncommon for them to have one or more for promotion or just to keep for themselves.

Also, of course, there's this:
"‘Cedes," Kurt said with patience, "remember when I told you David was in a band? And he was the lead singer? Well... one of these has to be his band because beneath the flyer was a set-list!"

So the better question, I guess, would be, why wouldn't it be Dave's band? Why would he

[lizzypoodle]

I wish that I could cook like Kurt apparently can. I love Mercedes. I love their lunches together, and I love you for writing this. I'm always thrilled to see that it's been updated.

[cinder1013]

Why do I have a really bad feeling about Kurt crashing that bar? And muwahahahaha about him sabotaging Rachel.

[carolina_hope]

I love this. how they are building a friendship. the underlying feeling of more. love the competition. and Kurt so would sabotage Rachel.but what Dave said is true

[firstmrshummel]

Dave, you are flirting with Kurt. YOU LIKE HIM JUST ADMIT IT TO YOURSELF THERE IS NO SHAME ONLY LOVE

Both Dave's "tastes like ass" and Kurt's "swallowing is a gift" comments had me ROTFLMAO. They're so cute when they're awkward. I love that Dave not only acknowledged that Kurt has the birthday that made him legal, but bought him two thoughtful gifts to honor the occasion. Kurt cooking for Dave is fantastic - I love to cook, and it's definitely a way to impress people that I want to impress.

I am dying for the next chapter. They are already skirting the line of propriety when in school, I can only hope that it gets tossed out the window altogether when they meet outside of that somewhat controlled environment.

I seriously love this universe you've created, and am on the edge of my seat for more of it.