The Light Side of the Shadow Wall

Dec 18, 2011 18:32

Title: The Light Side of the Shadow Wall
Description: Dimas de Teran is faced with the impossible task of winning over the girl he loves without ever talking to her face to face. With the help of his friends and former foes, will he succeed?
A/N: Written for jenbunny, with very best wishes.
This is my first time writing a Usa/Mamo fic and it’s a bit rough ( Read more... )

shitennou, romance, action/adventure, serenity/usagi, senshi, friendship, alternate universe, santa esperanza, endymion/mamoru

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warriorofice December 23 2011, 04:36:45 UTC
thank you so much for your lovely comments! your reviews --> much happiness.

lol, zoisite IS a terror. he just kept sniping at mamoru and wouldn't stop, but i think it was probably good for him (mamoru) in this 'verse xD. it is such a relief to hear that serafina is a good fit for usagi. i find it such a struggle to write her as a sweet person without being overly naive or obnoxious. but i loved your usagi in Son and Brother, Husband and Father! she was the perfect fit for mamoru there, always in his life but never intrusive, and always able to put her finger on what should make the people around her happiest.

ah well...i'm also curious about what happens in this verse because, well, i don't know all of it yet myself! yes, the oscura luna kills zacarias's mother, and between year 20 and the light side of the shadow wall, they're pretty much run out of town with some lingering tentacles here and there. that involves all sorts of gory adventures for zacarias, casimiro, and joaquin, and they hook up with nicodemo along the way. even dimas is involved, besides the little knife fight with zacarias, although they don't really run into each other that much. magdalena and casimiro meet and marry, and so do nico and maricela. joaquin and rosalia are probably the second-to-last holdouts after emilia ;) i'm going to have to look into why mariposa is such a hot spot!

thank goodness dimas and serafina falling in love worked out :) i was coming down to the deadline with a much longer fic than i expected and i was kind of like will this work in two short scenes?? please let it work!! i also have not seen any SM episodes with the three lights so that was rather interesting... it was a struggle to make seiya/sergio likable but i had a very clear image of him daydreaming about kakyuu on a bright day and that made him more sympathetic to me.

joaquin and rosalia wiggled their way in at the last minute and just had to have their say. i suspect that this means i have to figure out what happens to them (how can you not love the girl who makes you eat chili dust?)! i will do my best :)

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