I come bearing gifts.
We have a doozy, here. On my way between the auction house and the mailbox raising professions on my paladin, I came across this. The "Currently" made me suspicious. I was rewarded.
I don't understand. "You must be 23+ to RP with me." I can understand only wanting to RP with other adults. I really do. I personally can't stand RPing with younger people myself (though I do make exceptions). However, 23? Did you just pull the most random number out of your ass? Honey, most people are considered adults at 18/19. Even 21 makes sense. But 23? WHY 23? WHAT.
The "Not for the faint or young." also makes me think you're a blatant ERPer working to get their rocks off with futa-torture-bdsm tentacle rape. NO. That does not belong in public RP.
Also, for the demon in disguise bit. You say "NOBODY CAN KNOW SHE'S A DEMON WAHHHH" and yet...go on to describe all the ways in which she looks like one. Wolf-like silver eyes? Sorry, honey, people ARE going to side-eye that and go WTF? Not to mention that your horns would show under your hood when it lays flat. SORRY.
As for everything else, I'll leave that to you, my lovely WCSueers, to pick it apart. Have at it.
Can we have a "You must be this tall to RP" tag?