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oneforyourfireTitle: your lips, they got me going
Word count: 3000
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: 28
Summary: Jaehwan is just irresistible, infectious, just too good at making Kyungsoo want, and Kyungsoo is just unnerved, disconcerted, intrigued. Helpless.
A/N note: i hope your gratuitous dick sucking with a side of angst and feelings????, title
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jesus god I didn't even consider 69 when I prompted this and I hadn't since and I don't know why because it's so obviously perfect. God, this was so fucking hot okay, I'm going to try and be somewhat coherent, here we go.
Kyungsoo was great here, I love what you did with his thoughts, and you somehow made me want to smack him (that never happens!!) and comfort him at the same time, angsty boy. Don't be afraid, bb, you want to be special and you are special can't you see that --okay, back on track.
You mentioned to me that you couldn't get Jaehwan right but I think you got his voice spot on. The minute he opened his mouth I was a goner--he's filthy bt sweet and cute at the same time and I lost it. “Hm, these dick sucking lips want to be sucking your dick.” --that right there, I had to stop and breathe slowly for a bit. Rinse and repeat pretty much any time he says anything in this. Holy shit.
AND YOU MADE IT ANGSTY and I'm full of feelings and I JUST WANT THEM TO BE HAPPY DAMN IT how do you do this every time, hit with a double whammy of HEAVY FEELS right in the midst of SUPER SEXY PORN? How? Is there a secret? I don't get it, I'm at a loss.
I can't believe you wrote this dumbass prompt that i distinctly remember prompting while intoxicated--or at least saying "wow this is a dumbass prompt" right after submitting--and made it this fantastic thing. I'm gonna lie down and process for a while.
<3 <3 <3
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and im glad you liked it, especially the dynamics
it means a lot to me ;;;
and im sorry for the feelings, they just happened idek how to stop them
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