your lips, they got me going

Feb 16, 2016 12:19

Livejournal Username: oneforyourfire
Title: your lips, they got me going
Word count: 3000
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: 28
Summary: Jaehwan is just irresistible, infectious, just too good at making Kyungsoo want, and Kyungsoo is just unnerved, disconcerted, intrigued. Helpless.
A/N note: i hope your gratuitous dick sucking with a side of angst and feelings????, title ( Read more... )

warning: nc-17, d.o/ken

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carcharias1130 February 16 2016, 12:07:08 UTC
IM GOING TO GO SCREAM FOREVER THIS WAS (one of my dozen or so) PROMPTS, FUCK

jesus god I didn't even consider 69 when I prompted this and I hadn't since and I don't know why because it's so obviously perfect. God, this was so fucking hot okay, I'm going to try and be somewhat coherent, here we go.

Kyungsoo was great here, I love what you did with his thoughts, and you somehow made me want to smack him (that never happens!!) and comfort him at the same time, angsty boy. Don't be afraid, bb, you want to be special and you are special can't you see that --okay, back on track.

You mentioned to me that you couldn't get Jaehwan right but I think you got his voice spot on. The minute he opened his mouth I was a goner--he's filthy bt sweet and cute at the same time and I lost it. “Hm, these dick sucking lips want to be sucking your dick.” --that right there, I had to stop and breathe slowly for a bit. Rinse and repeat pretty much any time he says anything in this. Holy shit.AND YOU MADE IT ANGSTY and I'm full of feelings and I JUST WANT ( ... )

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oneforyourfire March 31 2016, 11:47:44 UTC
tbh what a beautiful fucking prompt this was (their mouths are sinful and they should be sinning near e/o, pls drunk prompt more)
and im glad you liked it, especially the dynamics
it means a lot to me ;;;
and im sorry for the feelings, they just happened idek how to stop them

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naegastar February 21 2016, 12:05:18 UTC
I'm so late w/ this comment but I can't believe this. I can't even believe this, they 69!!!! SIXTY!!! NINE!!! KENSOO!!! THOSE MOUTHS!!!!

And then the feelings, of course Jaehwan is the one who pours out the fondness and love first, he's so open and free.

Those mouths coated w/ chicken grease tho....shinier than any gloss...boys with nice mouths club. A++ as always n_n

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oneforyourfire March 31 2016, 11:50:04 UTC
BOY WITH NICE MOUTH CLUBS
tbh now i need sandeul and jin here, too
just a giant collection of boys with big mouths using them on e/o
fuck

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the_i_fan February 25 2016, 17:09:51 UTC
an aggravatingly perfect plushness to his mouth You did not lie.

He drops a series of infuriatingly fond so smalls and so cutes and so preciouses into the crown of Kyungsoo’s head This HURTS??

his lips-his beautiful dick sucking lips-swollen and ruined around an imploring Kyungsooyah. I can't.

I'm so glad this is finished, and it was so so so worth the wait. Thanks for ruining me with your words, again.

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oneforyourfire March 31 2016, 11:39:59 UTC
ahhhhh im glad it lived up to the hype and excitement
i love these boys together
and oh the gross beautiful sex they would have after putting their gross beautiful mouths on e/o ;;;;

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