I've always liked the J/7 stories where Chakotay is a deluded jerk... LOL... I've never had much use for him. :)
There were several places in the story I noticed where the word was... incorrect I guess is the best way to describe it. For example Costume instead of Custom... a spell checker wouldn't catch that. Get a beta-reader, or even just a friend to read over it to catch stuff like that, that a spell check program won't...
You have great ideas... good takes on the J/7 relationship... I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff! :)
I love love love Janeway telling Chakotay off! LOL... he's so clueless sometimes but fun to watch him get put in his place.
thanks for reading and enjoying it, despite the mistakes. i have to apologise for them, i just put it online before i lost my nerve. i know it´s no excuse. i promise to do better:)
never liked chakotay. i never liked the end of the show, when he and seven became a couple i thought it was a joke.
my thoughts exactly. it was ridiculous. when i watched the show on german television i was always waiting for j/7 to kiss and come together, every week. i was always kind of angry when it didn´t. chakotay, i mean really.
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I've always liked the J/7 stories where Chakotay is a deluded jerk... LOL... I've never had much use for him. :)
There were several places in the story I noticed where the word was... incorrect I guess is the best way to describe it. For example Costume instead of Custom... a spell checker wouldn't catch that. Get a beta-reader, or even just a friend to read over it to catch stuff like that, that a spell check program won't...
You have great ideas... good takes on the J/7 relationship... I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff! :)
I love love love Janeway telling Chakotay off! LOL... he's so clueless sometimes but fun to watch him get put in his place.
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never liked chakotay. i never liked the end of the show, when he and seven became a couple i thought it was a joke.
i simply had to do something about it:)
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It really grossed me out when Chakotay and Seven became a couple. Seven was never meant to be with anyone else than Capt. Janeway!
Good for you! In my opinion, that is actually what fan fiction is for, to let us correct the mistakes the show makes ;)
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my thoughts exactly. it was ridiculous. when i watched the show on german television i was always waiting for j/7 to kiss and come together, every week. i was always kind of angry when it didn´t. chakotay, i mean really.
i agree, fan fiction forever!
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i have to admit i´m a sucker for romance;)
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thank you. as always my pleasure.
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