Jubilee

Apr 25, 2009 17:24

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jintymac April 25 2009, 16:42:05 UTC
This was very sweet ;-)

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vicar_dibley April 26 2009, 10:32:54 UTC
thanks so much:) i´m glad you liked it.

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akasarahsmom April 26 2009, 00:32:57 UTC
Very nice.

I've always liked the J/7 stories where Chakotay is a deluded jerk... LOL... I've never had much use for him. :)

There were several places in the story I noticed where the word was... incorrect I guess is the best way to describe it. For example Costume instead of Custom... a spell checker wouldn't catch that. Get a beta-reader, or even just a friend to read over it to catch stuff like that, that a spell check program won't...

You have great ideas... good takes on the J/7 relationship... I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff! :)

I love love love Janeway telling Chakotay off! LOL... he's so clueless sometimes but fun to watch him get put in his place.

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vicar_dibley April 26 2009, 10:36:16 UTC
thanks for reading and enjoying it, despite the mistakes. i have to apologise for them, i just put it online before i lost my nerve. i know it´s no excuse. i promise to do better:)

never liked chakotay. i never liked the end of the show, when he and seven became a couple i thought it was a joke.

i simply had to do something about it:)

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akasarahsmom April 26 2009, 12:31:46 UTC
Oh, no apologies necessary. Mistakes happen, and posting before you lose your nerve is actually the only 'excuse' that is understandable! :)

It really grossed me out when Chakotay and Seven became a couple. Seven was never meant to be with anyone else than Capt. Janeway!

Good for you! In my opinion, that is actually what fan fiction is for, to let us correct the mistakes the show makes ;)

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vicar_dibley April 26 2009, 13:15:18 UTC
thanks for being so understanding.

my thoughts exactly. it was ridiculous. when i watched the show on german television i was always waiting for j/7 to kiss and come together, every week. i was always kind of angry when it didn´t. chakotay, i mean really.

i agree, fan fiction forever!

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jennjenn30 May 5 2009, 01:49:18 UTC
I just read this story for the first time and I thought it was beautiful. You did a wonderful job.

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vicar_dibley May 5 2009, 14:40:21 UTC
thanks:) it´s so nice when people enjoy reading my stories.
i have to admit i´m a sucker for romance;)

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vicar_dibley November 14 2009, 21:02:23 UTC
can´t tell:)

thank you. as always my pleasure.

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