Fic: Family Arc II - 34A

Oct 15, 2008 07:28


Title: Family Arc II - 34A
Author: vic_sim
Disclaimer: I don't own anything except the plot. I apologise for any incorrect portrayal of people or any inaccurate details mentioned in my story.
Pairing: None at the moment.
Category: Angst/Comfort
Rating: NC-16 (just to be safe)
Summary: Flashback in Kyuhyun's mind.
Arc I Arc II

Hey pretty boy! No bodyguard today? )

fic:family arc ii, fic:super junior

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raknakondee October 15 2008, 04:45:50 UTC
poor guy
should have more good memories instead of all those drama....

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vic_sim October 15 2008, 08:18:23 UTC
i think so too!
it was kind of hard to write that scene..cos i've never tried writing something with so much drama in it...but hope it came out well..

Thank you for reading!

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sallysync October 15 2008, 10:49:27 UTC
SPOT!

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sallysync October 15 2008, 11:25:33 UTC
YAY! YOU'RE BACK!
I've been waiting for you.
Anyway...

The part wherein the bullies seemed to be doing it to Kyu I was like OMGN!!!! and they didn't so that's fine, but they're so mean... (and that's why they are called bullies)

The second part I liked the part where he kind of interacted with Heechul... I found it funny and I didn't know why... And the idea of Kyu being happy with the talk I wished Kyu would be strong enough if he remembers bad memories from the past during the talk...

Looking forward for the next...

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vic_sim October 15 2008, 13:18:26 UTC
Thanks for waiting!!^^

yup they're bullies...the whole scene is actually from my imagination cos i've not met any bullies before..so wasnt really sure if it was accurate portrayal...

I'm glad you found the interaction interesting..^^ I liked writing that part. I hope he will be strong enough.At least he will be right now in my mind...I don't know what happens when I write it out...

I'll try to post asap..hopefully it wouldnt be another 3-week hiatus...^^

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Revelation flowerlight October 19 2008, 21:53:35 UTC
wow, major revelation in this scene with some of kyu's past reveled-totally unexpected.
Good plot twist >.<
hankyung having a hard time.
i wonder if the focus will shift onto him next.

thanku for this fab chapter :-)

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Re: Revelation vic_sim October 21 2008, 15:59:42 UTC
it was unexpected? i always thought that i was hinting to something like that all the time....maybe it was just me..haha.

The focus may shift..still halfway writing the next chapter.

u're welcome! haha.thank you for reading!

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vic_sim October 24 2008, 09:45:40 UTC
aww...don't cry...

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