Fic: Family Arc II - 24

Aug 12, 2008 23:33

Title: Family Arc II - 24
Author: vic_sim
Disclaimer: I don't own anything except the plot. I apologise for any incorrect portrayal of people or any inaccurate details mentioned in my story.
Pairing: None at the moment. Sungmin. Kyuhyun. Eeteuk.
Category: Angst + some humour
Rating: NC-16 (just to be safe)
Summary: Breakfast and the trip to the ( Read more... )

fic:family arc ii, fic:super junior

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renichifreak August 12 2008, 18:53:04 UTC
OH!!!!!!!!!!! Things were going so well!!!

Sungmin-open mouth, insert foot...

I hope everything is okay with them...Sungmin's a persistent guy, so hopefully he can apologize to Kyu...

I LOVE the doctor. I wonder if Kyu will remember him...?

Hopefully, he'll talk to Teukie or someone about everything...

::anxious::Love it!!!!!!!

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vic_sim August 13 2008, 02:08:28 UTC
i think he will.at least he does right now in my mind.
the doctor is most prob going to be a one-off character.haha. evil me

he will talk to someone i think but not yet.

thank you!!^^
i'll most prob only post the next chapter 2 to 3 days from now.so you'll have to wait.

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renichifreak August 13 2008, 17:56:37 UTC
...You.....

You're lucky I love your story, cuz I'm not known for my patience!! hehehehe

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vic_sim August 14 2008, 03:19:29 UTC
haha.thank goodness i'm lucky then.
^^i'll try to type a longer chapter 25.

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baby_buggs August 12 2008, 19:32:48 UTC
Eeteuk got chased out of the kitchen, and sungmin is terrified.
And personally, I think that doctors a really good person. its sweet that he knew Kyu before and knows most of what happened. I'm really glad that Kyu's getting better, and I just hope that the members won't smother him with attention...so many things that can go wrong there...
As for reintroducing the father...I really can't decide...I'm leaning towards yes because then itll show Kyu interactions with his father as well as his mom. but at the same time, I don't want Kyu to be depressed or anything after seeing his dad...but we'll see. Keep up the great work!

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vic_sim August 13 2008, 02:19:29 UTC
the doc knew some things thou not all.but it reveals more of kyu. yup. i agree with you.
i'm half wanting to make kyu happy asap but half wanting to prolong my fic.sigh.i see if i get any sudden inspiration as i write the other chapters.^^
thank you!!^_^

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reader_a August 12 2008, 19:55:50 UTC
aww poor Kyuhyunnie. *huggles him*
Sungmin means well but Kyu misunderstands it, I wonder if Kyuhyun will have a heart to heart with Hankyung soon again - or maybe Kibum - I think he might need it. Can someone please smack the boy? he needs a reality check... ^^

do you have any ideas for the father? or do you feel like you want to continue? I really like this story - I won't mind if you bring the father in

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vic_sim August 13 2008, 02:24:35 UTC
yup.sungmin was merely concerned.i cant believe i wrote that about sungmin.still in shock
hankyung or kibum? you can predict my mind though i wont tell you who it is right now. haha.reality check is good.i'll take note.

i have an idea.don't know whether its good or bad.but act i've thought of bringing the father in quite a long time ago.i just havent found the correct timing to do so.haha.if i continue its really going to be quite long.haha.but i'm leaning more and more towards bringing the father in.haha.

thank you!!

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zoolooney August 12 2008, 20:29:34 UTC
Ooh~ Umma!Teukie at the stove...battlestations, everyone! LOL.

Aww~ I think I really like Kyu's doctor.

.....well now. It is a good thing Sungmin is so flexible. He can easily kick himself in the ass. **Frown**

**Sigh** Poor Kyu. Will you write about the visit to the kids in the next chapter? I hope they can sort of cheer the poor boy up.

...o.0 Re-introduce Kyu's father? The no-good, child abandoning, more concerned with his image, didn't care that his firstborn was in the hospital piece if matter? Hmm. Only if a couple of the boys get to beat him up. Or Heechul gets to verbally rip him to shreds. XD

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vic_sim August 13 2008, 02:28:33 UTC
haha.battlestations?

i created a second character that people like!yay!^^ though he's most prob going to be in this chapter only

hmmm.i think he's feeling beaten up already.
if i can fit it into the chapter, i will.but rest assure that there will be a visit to the kids.

haha.i see if beating the father up goes with my timeline. though the image of heechul verbally shredding him into bits is so wonderful. -cackles-

thanks for all your ideas!^_^

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lizzybabycakes3 August 12 2008, 21:14:09 UTC
awwwwh.
kyu<3
ahh sungmin oppa was adorablee.
hmm.
reintroducee the fatherr.
hmm.
yessh. id love to see waht happens to the fatherr.
clearly i think heechul would kill him.
lol
thanks for the post!
cant wait for next chapterr,

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vic_sim August 13 2008, 02:30:51 UTC
so far there's more for introducing the father.so i'm really leaning towards that. haha.i love your thoughts.
heechul would kill him
haha.^^

thank you for reading!^_^
i'll most prob only post the next chapter in 2 or 3 days time.but i'll try to make it nice and long.^^

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