A Kiss Before Dying (4/10)

[ellavee]

Title: A Kiss Before Dying (4/10)
Rating: R for language and content
Summary: 15 year old Veronica has never been kissed and Lamb makes her a promise.  Characters/Pairing: Veronica/Lamb, (mentions of Logan, Duncan, and Keith)
Spoilers: will eventually be through entire series but AU from 3X14
Word Count: 4100
Disclaimer: I don't own Veronica Mars or

Comments

[josiefier]

The angst queen approves! Well aside from the V/not!Lamb imagery lol. But I do like this chap - giving them those silent understandings and such. Can't wait for the next update! :)

[ellavee]

why thank you, im happy you approve!
you know i almost took that part out, but i thought it showed that even though it was good, it wasnt what it should have been. should i take it out? what do you think? i can, its really not a big deal to me. if it doesnt get my point across the correct way theres no sense in having it there. let me know!
anyways im happy you liked the chapter! the next one is alot lighter on the angst and a little heavier on the fluff. oh and it has some smut. ;)

[josiefier]

No, no - don't take it out. It's your fic, you're more than allowed to write it as you wish. Plus she's admitting - at least to herself - that Lamb's still the favorite, that the others can't compare. And I really love that you gave Lamb the "cuddling" line. It's great as is - no need to change it. :)

Woohoo! :D

[ellavee]

phew ok, i'll leave it then.
and im happy you loved me using that line for Lamb. that hallway scene is one of my favorites from the series, because i think her inner doubt and dissapointment is really obvious in that moment. it just seemed perfect for them in this fic.
thanks!!!

[ladymamie09]

Another wonderful chapter. Keep up the good work.

[ellavee]

thanks! im happy you liked it!

[kitkaterg]

The cuddling line should have been said by Lamb in the series. lol, I love that line.

Love forever.

I love that like... all the major story points are still getting told from the show, it's just sliighhhtly different.

Also, your Lamb is cute.
I want to comfort him.

lol

[ellavee]

i so agree, its definitely a lambesque quote. even though it wasnt him that said it.
theres gonna be some more 'sliighhhtly' different story points in the next chapter.
im happy you think my lamb is cute, he's gonna be even cuter (naked-er) in the next chapter!
thanks for the comment!

ps when do we get more of your fic?

[ashleynichole10]

great chapter! im upset that she chose logan but i still have faith lol. update soon

[ellavee]

thanks! im happy you liked it!
and dont be too upset, she may have chosen him for that moment, but don lamb is the one she loves. ;)