Okay first off, A+++++ plot setup. I actually visited Japan a couple months ago and it was just so cool to see all these places that I saw show up in the fic (Prometheus at the top of the TT! Tentacle monsters near Condommania! OH OF COURSE). One of the reasons I love the PJO series so much is because of this exact tongue-in-cheek play on myths and modern life and it was just fantastic. The fact that it ties both into recent events and the end of the book was great as well; you could totally see this happening plausibly in their future without deviating from the books and the emotional impact of the split on all the characters that I already love was all BAM, OUCH MY HEART
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THIS COMMENT TOTALLY MAKES UP FOR THE FACT THAT THERE WEREN'T ANY ALL WEEKEND. *flails!*
I ... I don't even know what to say. I mean, fdjsijfrlkc, this is the first fic of this length I've written, so most of the time I just felt like I was flailing around in the dark :D:D SO A MILLION HEARTS IN MY EYES FOR YOU, I am SO glad you liked it this much to leave the MOST EPIC COMMENT! And thanks for the concrit -- I also didn't have anyone to proof-read, so thank you!
AND THIS IS THE FIRST GREAT SPARKLY TIARA I HAVE EVER GOTTEN, AHAHA. I shall cherish it like a cherishing thing.
And yes, Japan! Were you just in Tokyo or where all did you see?
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I ... I don't even know what to say. I mean, fdjsijfrlkc, this is the first fic of this length I've written, so most of the time I just felt like I was flailing around in the dark :D:D SO A MILLION HEARTS IN MY EYES FOR YOU, I am SO glad you liked it this much to leave the MOST EPIC COMMENT! And thanks for the concrit -- I also didn't have anyone to proof-read, so thank you!
AND THIS IS THE FIRST GREAT SPARKLY TIARA I HAVE EVER GOTTEN, AHAHA. I shall cherish it like a cherishing thing.
And yes, Japan! Were you just in Tokyo or where all did you see?
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Now random babblings about the stuff I loved:
POKERFACE! THE JUSTINS! OMG! PERCY'S DRUNK NIGHT WITH CLARISSE! THE PERCY/NICO-NESS OF IT ALL!
Your amazing, this story has made my weekend =D
Um, ya this ends my adoring comment.
(I love you and second that nomination <3)
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