For the final proofreading of my essay, the Sage (Judge) was in charge. The Sage took out the blue pencil of the editor, and corrected my grammar and spelling. Betty Flowers explains that the Sage (Judge) is “your most imperious English teacher.” In the final stage, the Sage stops the Fool (Madman), Seer (Architect), and Toolmaker (Carpenter) from ( Read more... )

For the global revision of my second draft, the Architect directed most of the activity. The chain of command came from the Architect to the Toolmaker, who was the foreman on the job. As the crew boss, the Toolmaker put up the scaffolding, under the Architect’s direction. Afterwards, the Architect inspected the Toolmaker’s work against the ( Read more... )

When reading how “Shapeshifters” can be used to produce better writing, I became confused about who these “Shapeshifters” actually were. Therefore, I decided to read more about them and the Flowers’ Paradigm of writing, which introduces these characters ( Read more... )