Comments | venusian_eye: in which I return triumphantly

venusian_eye

in which I return triumphantly

Mar 22, 2011 14:54

( bearing presents you don't want )

i should be shot, i just have a lot of feelings, bad poetry

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halcyon_iota March 22 2011, 19:13:34 UTC

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venusian_eye March 22 2011, 22:03:38 UTC

daaaaaamn, girl, that's quite the keysmash!!!

LOL RELEVANT ICON ohmeguro March 22 2011, 21:45:08 UTC

YOU ARE STILL IMPERFECT!

Re: LOL RELEVANT ICON venusian_eye March 22 2011, 22:02:11 UTC

I ROFL'D

( I have been working on my Black Swan fic very very slowly ♥ p-perhaps I should stick to prose. )

Re: LOL RELEVANT ICON ohmeguro March 22 2011, 23:18:02 UTC

HDU LAUGH I ARE SERIOUS BLACK SWAN

(:DDDDDD)

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venusian_eye March 23 2011, 22:21:48 UTC

HUSH, YOU'LL SPOIL MY BAD MOOD ♥

I am slightly proud because it is full of puns! b-because heart murmurs are a... a medical thing. and vaulted chambers are like, you know, the chambers of the heart - but we already knew I was going to Pun Hell.

fieryredqueen March 23 2011, 21:52:15 UTC

There are many lovely turns of phrase in there.

venusian_eye March 23 2011, 22:25:19 UTC

Thank you! ♥ I haven't written poetry in ages, I was a little worried about how it'd turn out.

WALT WHITMAN IS SINGING THE BODY ELECTRIC RIGHT NOW, UNDER THE WORKING GRASS. obseletevulture March 25 2011, 02:32:13 UTC

It's lovely. Someone's been e.e. cummings-ing, perhaps?
(The parentheticals...)

All I write are sonnets, so...
Finding someone who freeverses and doesn't just put together random snatches of words without care for meter is more than joy. ♥

CONFESSION: venusian_eye March 27 2011, 21:00:30 UTC

crazily enough, I am almost completely poetry-illiterate, and so I only just got into Walt Whitman and I have yet to go anywhere near e. e. cummings.

(I got me the Norton Anthology of Modern Poetry and enough coffee to kill a bear, I'll be set for a few weeks.)

YOU MUST JUST PICK IT UP NATURALLY THEN, LIKE A HUMAN ANTENNA. obseletevulture April 6 2011, 03:06:54 UTC

XDDD That just makes it more amazing, you realize~

Though any Norton Anthology is usually awesome enough to kill a bear itself. (And heavy enough...I had one for a textbook and kept it because it's probably worth everything it cost.)
Mm. Coffee, though. Can't argue with coffee...

I GOT POETRY IN MY BLOOD, YO! venusian_eye April 7 2011, 19:22:30 UTC

this just in: e.e. cummings seems like a grade-A tool.

also just in: DEAR GOD I FORGOT TO DRINK ANY COFFEE TODAY D:

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