BBC Sherlock fic. Proposition part 2, Electric Boogaloo.

[velvet_mace]

TITLE: Slow Sweet Surrender.
RATING: NC-17 oh yeah.
PAIRING: Sherlock/John with an appearance by Mycroft.
WARNING: Non-con. Bondage. Rather dark.
WORD COUNT: 9400. Yeah I got a wee bit indulgent.
A/N: This is a direct sequel of The Proposition. It makes more sense to read that one first.

SUMMARY: "I'm not evil," Sherlock said,

Comments

[originally]

I really enjoyed this and the previous story; so very dark but interesting to explore how things would pan out if Sherlock was truly a sociopath. Rather scarily, it seems! I love your Mycroft, he's just right.

You mentioned that it needed a Brit pick so I read it with an eye to that, but nothing really jumped out at me. I did notice a couple of typos though.

perhaps the subtly and reasonableness should be subtlety, I think? and his voice dripping with concerned should be concern.

[velvet_mace]

Yea! Thanks! Off to change.

[thaliae]

I enjoyed this a lot! I was mostly just stopping by to say that while I enjoy my non-con, non-con+physchology just makes my day :-)

I don't normally Brit-pick, or correct grammar/spelling etc., because I realise that makes me a irritaing pedant! However there were a few places which made me think "it's a shame that hasn't been brit-picked/made NHS-compliant, because then this would be bordering on perfect..."

But then I saw the comment above, so if you want my thoughts let me know, otherwise ignore paragraphs 2&3 and just bask in the well earned praise of the first few lines of the comment.

[velvet_mace]

Go ahead. It's never to late to clean this up!

[kickair8p]

Yowsa! I have a hard time believing Dom!Sherlock, but this sold me.

~

[velvet_mace]

Hee, I have a soft spot for Dom!Sherlock, but I'm not adverse to it being the other way around. Variety is the spice of life.

[byrons_brain]

Wonderful... so kinky and HOT!

[velvet_mace]

Thank you!

[jantra]

Dammit I don't read this fandom.

Stop making me read such fucking epic fics.

...Wait.

[velvet_mace]

Oh but you should read this fandom. Because the fic is awesome and the art is better than any other live action fandom I've been in. It's actual ART, not manips. And there are some amazing artists. Case in point: Dauntdraws NSFW threesome. Oh hommina.

[jantra]

I've never even SEEN it. XD

[velvet_mace]

That can be rectified.

[gorgon_mythos]

I read your first story and now this sequel- it's dark and frightening and intimidating and brilliant. All geniuses are Moriarty's, just to different extents. Cherry on top is that Mycroft would shoot John out of a war just to steer him towards Sherlock. That I think was the most daunting and amazing touch to these stories.

[velvet_mace]

They are all a bit amoral, certainly! Something about the juxtoposition of tenderness and amorality kinda lights a fire in me. It's scary, yet alluring.