Comments | velocitygrass: SGA WIP: Our Own Reality. 11/?. John/Rodney.

velocitygrass

SGA WIP: Our Own Reality. 11/?. John/Rodney.

Nov 13, 2009 00:57

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In this chapter: Just one scene. The mission review covers that mission.

This is set at the beginning of season 5. The fic will be John/Rodney, NC-17, and include a warning for ( skip) behavior that is technically sexual harassment (though I hope you'll understand John).

( Our Own Reality 11/? )

shipping, mcshep, our own reality, unbetaed fanfics, nanowrimo

Comments 15

mecurtin November 13 2009, 00:05:41 UTC

\o/ dancedance! Rodney is becoming in-vest-ed!

velocitygrass November 14 2009, 09:36:10 UTC

Yay \o/

mezzo_cammin November 13 2009, 00:06:50 UTC

YES! God, yes!

velocitygrass November 14 2009, 09:36:25 UTC

We're getting there :)

mecurtin November 13 2009, 00:15:07 UTC

also: nit:

>He needed to know the relationship the meant so much to John that he'd given up parts of their friendship for it.

He need to know about? the relationship

velocitygrass November 14 2009, 09:37:02 UTC

I'm actually not sure about that one. Though truthfully the whole end of this sounds awkward and rushed and should be rewritten. But thank you!

mornincamper November 13 2009, 01:17:47 UTC

Yeah, um. WE NEED TO KNOW TOO!
*g*

how do you make sitting around watching a mission unfold so damned exiting?!

Brava!

velocitygrass November 14 2009, 09:38:40 UTC

Well, I did tell it as if it was happening and I'm glad it was exciting. I only really thought about the kiss when I first envisioned it, but then I realized I'd have to write the context so that people would feel the urgency and desperation in John.

And you'll get to see it, don't worry ;)

Thank you!

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Re: SGA WIP: Our Own Reality. 11/?. John/Rodney. velocitygrass November 14 2009, 09:38:48 UTC

Thank you!