Burning: Part 2

[vampiremadonna]

Jae was speechless, not knowing what to say or how to respond. He knew that Yunho wasn't lying to him. He could see the truth in his eyes, hear it in the clear, clipped way he spoke. Was it really that easy? Would it be so simple to fix what was broken?

Yunho's face turned serious. "I know I fucked up, baby, and I don't deserve your forgiveness

Comments

[yunho1205]

Awwwwwwwww!! Thank you so much for writing this!! I loved it!! Like I had said before, I really didn't know how to put Yunjae back together after the way I had written Burning, but you totally did it!!! Hehehehe!! You'll have to forgive the emo mood I was in at the time that I wrote it!! But everything is better now! :)

Anywho! I'm so happy with the way that you filled in all the blanks that I had implied with regards to Yunho's parents and stuff!! I couldn't have done it any better myself!! Seriously, you hit the nail right on the head!! You gave insight, and answered questions that some readers were wondering about! :)))

Eeeeeeeeee!! And I loved how you still had Jae telling Yun to stop talking while they were doin it!! Hehehehehe!! I just love a feisty Jae!! But I also liked that you made Yun more assertive, more determined to prove his love, no matter how much Jae pushed him away. He fought for Jae, made him see that he was remorseful without being weak, without begging. *sigh* It was so nice . . .

OMO!! And when Jae finally gave in and was thinking that their love making was more of a goodbye, my heart was breaking, cuz I had no idea how you were gonna end this!! You sneaky woman!!

Awwww, so like I said to you earlier, thank you so much for writing this for me, and showing me that fixing a broken Yunjae is totally possible!! ♥♥♥♥♥

[vampiremadonna]

You're welcome ♥♥♥♥♥ :)