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vampiremadonna

Burning: Part 2

May 24, 2011 18:05

Jae was speechless, not knowing what to say or how to respond. He knew that Yunho wasn't lying to him. He could see the truth in his eyes, hear it in the clear, clipped way he spoke. Was it really that easy? Would it be so simple to fix what was broken?

Yunho's face turned serious. "I know I fucked up, baby, and I don't deserve your forgiveness ( Read more... )

yunho, jaejoong, two shot, nc-17, smut, angst, burning, yunjae

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vampiremadonna May 24 2011, 22:09:02 UTC

SPOT for Perv #1!

rainycakes May 25 2011, 02:35:48 UTC

Wow! I was all into the angst and there was the whole "this would be the last time they made love" thing and the "saying goodbye in his heart" part...and then it went like 180 degrees!! I was all, "...wtf just happened?" ROFL

I, of course, being the YunJae shipper that I am, am glad they ended up together and are giving it another go (haha 'another go', oh they're giving it another go all right *wink*wink*); but I think Sara has turned me into an angst lover as well. I have discovered that I'm a complete masochist and enjoy being tortured with it!

In all honesty, I was kind of partial to that whole angsty saying goodbye part, because that's something I didn't get to do. Dude, and I would've killed to have been able to do it and enjoy it the way they were "saying goodbye"!! kekeke xD Eternally perv #2~

Anywho~ I liked this. :) The two of you do indeed write a bit differently. lol But you're both awesome and I love that I have access to said awesomeness!! Weeee~ :D

yunho1205 May 25 2011, 05:47:26 UTC

Awwwwwwwww!! Thank you so much for writing this!! I loved it!! Like I had said before, I really didn't know how to put Yunjae back together after the way I had written Burning, but you totally did it!!! Hehehehe!! You'll have to forgive the emo mood I was in at the time that I wrote it!! But everything is better now ( ... )

vampiremadonna May 25 2011, 16:41:39 UTC

You're welcome ♥♥♥♥♥ :)

theamazingberry May 25 2011, 00:14:20 UTC

Jaejoong and Yunho got back together!! *throws confetti*

hurleysunn May 25 2011, 00:53:11 UTC

spot

hurleysunn May 25 2011, 23:37:51 UTC

YAYyayYAY Happy ending for our YunJae. They should always have happy endings :o)
Hopefully they'll have one in real life
This is an awesome addition & ending to Burning

vampiremadonna May 25 2011, 23:54:52 UTC

I'm totally confused now since you removed your comment but I did check it out earlier when you first posted and asianfanfics really was down for a little while. Anything could've been possible so don't be too hard on yourself. There's too much craziness in this fandom to not get a little paranoid every now and again :)

hurleysunn May 26 2011, 08:01:11 UTC

thanks... b/c i FREAKED out lol *facepalms*

yunho_ism May 25 2011, 01:19:23 UTC

i'm so glad that there's a sequel!
no more broken!yunjae~ /throws confetti
thank goodness they made up.
thank you for this.^^

keeaneegan May 25 2011, 04:02:51 UTC

this was when i feel so mad @yunho1205 an about to get mad at you when yunho said goodbye in his heart
but now i'm happy that they are together again ^_^
♥♥