Forbidden: Part 5

[vampiremadonna]

Title: Forbidden
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Length: Part 5/? (It's a LONG short story)
Summary: Jae is concerned about the attention his sister is receiving from a dangerous man but he isn't in any position to take care of it himself so he turns to the king. However, the King, Jung Yunho, presents unforeseen complications...

Comments

[crimson_miharu]

SPOT!

[vampiremadonna]

Yay! LJ doesn't hate you today. lol

[crimson_miharu]

Oh no it still hates me! I just happened to be checking my friends updates page and saw you updated :D

[vampiremadonna]

Lol. Poor you...

[crimson_miharu]

Oh wow! Finally some more insight into Yunho's past and what a past it is.Yunho has suffered a lot. No wonder he went out of his way to avoid Jaejoong after what had happened. Yunho knows exactly how Jae is feeling right now. How confused he must be. I guess this was his way of letting Jae know...I had so many thoughts in my head when I was reading this and now Im drawing a blank so I'll just say Im glad that the smut wasn't apart of this chapter it wouldn't have fit after that bomb shell of a revelation. Looking forward to the next update!

[vampiremadonna]

A little piece of trivia: that revelation wasn't supposed to happen. lol I was writing and that's what came so I went with it but it wasn't what I'd planned at all.
I kinda thought he'd read the book, there'd be a little clue about Yunho's sexual history but nothing like how it ended up, and while he was reading Yunho would...you know, almost exactly like it happened last time. But it didn't work out that way so now I have to figure out how to continue from here. *sigh*

[crimson_miharu]

YAY for the unexpected! I loved the chapter and I can totally see Jae comforting Yunho after that. Jae's mind is already thinking he and Yunho are so alike. Yunho was violated by someone he loved and respected and Jae was violated by Yunho someone he might not love yet but definitely respects since they have a few things in common. Go from there I guess let them talk it out. You can't just drop that type of bombshell and not say anything...

[vampiremadonna]

There's no talking in this fic! lol That's why I put it in the A/N. There's a lot of internal dialogue, which will give you insight, but they won't really talk to each other much. In that respect, I'm sticking to the movie. They didn't have a lot of heart to hearts, only in the end and what was said then were lies, at least on the Chief's side anyway. I'm not going to leave the fic with a lot of unanswered questions like the movie but at the same time, I'm not going to explain everything like I've done in other fics. I'm leaving it to my intelligent readers to figure things out for themselves. Hopefully >_>
It'll work out, I promise, and the ending will make up for whatever crap I do in between. Hopefully...

[crimson_miharu]

LOL I would've seen that if I had read all of the A/N all I saw was smutty ending LOL! You can't put the word smut in anything and expect me to continue on XD! This has become one of my fav stories. Im sure it will all turn out good!

[vampiremadonna]

Well lookout for some smut tmw then! lol