Romeo and Juliet Hetalia chapter 3
Title: Romeo and Juliet, Hetalia
Rating: PG-PG-13
Characters/Parrings: America, England, Canada, Italy, Prussia, Germany, most nations in smaller roles (Real names used)
Summary: (Hetalia) The story of forbidden love between two teens from rival families.
Wooo! Another chapter after so long. The bad thing is this is basically random fliller stuff. That's kinda why it took so long. It's sadly important stuff. Also, Next chapter is when is when I basically throw the book to the wall and say "Well, time to fuck up the plot!".
I don't own anything, bla, bla, bla.
Alfred and Matthew had eventually found Gilbert. The three were now sitting in Gilbert’s room, just lounging around until the party. Gilbert had, for some reason, pinned up a picture of Roderich, a noble related to the Capulets. The picture had some knives stuck out of it. When Alfred and Matthew saw that one laughed and one rolled his eyes. Gilbert just shrugged as if it was normal. He grabbed a knife off his nightstand and threw it at the picture, hitting it in the eye. After this small exchange Alfred jumped onto his bed and spread himself out on it. Prussia laughed and sat on the messy floor. Matthew just rolled his eyes and took an overturned chair from the floor. They started talking about everything and anything that came to mind.
“So, Gilbert, where’s your brother....Ludwig?” Alfred asked as he tossed a small ball he found on the floor at Gilbert. Gilbert caught it and threw it back.
“Off at the Capulets,” he sighed.
“Why?” Alfred asked as if this was the worst offence ever.
“HK wants to marry him off to their son,” He said. Matthew raised an eyebrow.
“Shouldn’t he be trying to marry you off? You ARE older...”
“Matthew Montague,” Alfred looked at him, horrified. “How could you suggest that our best friend marry a...a...Capulet,” he asked as if it was the worst thing ever. Matthew sighed,
“Well...it makes since. He IS older, even if he doesn’t act like it all the time.”
“But still! Capulet’s Matt, you know how evil they are!” Matthew went to answer back, but Gilbert butt in.
“I told HK I didn’t want to marry into the Capulet family,” He said, “He didn’t take it well at all. We had a big fight and he basically said I have to get married soon, but it doesn’t have to be to a Capulet.” Alfred looked at him strangely.
“You? Married? Some how that just seems odd...” Gilbert nodded. He really didn’t have any desire to get married to some random person picked out for him. Really, his uncle never married, and he didn’t get yelled at or anything. Alfred seemed to realize something,
“My parents aren’t going to be happy about this when they find out.”
“Why do they care?”
“Just think, Gil. The Capulets and your family are going to be all ‘buddy-buddy’ because of this. My parents are going to wonder why they didn’t choose OUR family.” Matthew nodded,
“Uncle Ivan won’t stand for it...he’ll want to find a way to connect mine and Alfred’s family to yours too.” Alfred looked at Gilbert,
“Your uncle is probably going to make YOU marry into the Montague family...” he said, “That’s the only thing that I can think of...then both the Montague and Capulet families will have connections.” Gilbert wrinkled his nose,
“I’d rather not marry you, Alfred.” He said. Alfred stuck his tongue out at Gilbert,
“There ARE more Montagues. It’s not like it’s gonna be me or Matt,” he said. Matt didn’t know what it was...but he didn’t like the thought of Gilbert marrying into his family. It just seemed...wrong, Gilbert really only ‘looked’ right by Alfred and himself. He wasn’t sure why, but the idea of Alfred and Gilbert together like that made him sick to his stomach. It must have been because then he would be forgotten by the two...yes, that must have been it. He wished for a subject change...anything to make this all over.
Apparently Alfred thought the same as he pointed to a sword by the door and commented on it.
“Nice sword, have I seen that one before?” Gilbert scoffed. Trust Alfred to start on weapons.
“Nope, I just got it!” He said, as he jumped up and picked it up. “Super sharp and all that too,” Alfred jumped over and the two discussed weapons. Matt rolled his eyes. Those two were such thugs sometimes, but none the less, he walked over and went to talk about Gilbert’s new sword.
Feliciano had gotten ready for the ball. He decided to dress as a girl, he rather liked dresses. He was
going to wear one of his nurse’s older ones. He twirled around his room, he felt so pretty in his dress~. It was red, with green swirls along the bottom, almost like an upside down tomato. He put on the half mask that went with it. He looked in the mirror again. It was such a pretty dress~ but he didn’t want to wear it to some party where his parents were trying to make him fall in love! That wasn’t fair...they didn’t make Lovino do that! He sighed, he probably wouldn’t fall for this...Ludwig anyways. He danced around his room a bit more, pretending to dance with someone. He giggled as he turned, pretending a guy was leading him in a dance. He then heard a cough from his door way. He turned to see his cousin, Arthur, at the door. He too had on a mask, his in green though.
“Arthur!” He said happily, “Did you come to get me for the party?” Arthur nodded,
“Yes, Feliciano, I did...now come on. Your parents are waiting for us.” He said. Not to mention his parents, and lots of guests. Feliciano made his signature ‘Ve~’ noise and went to his cousin’s side.
“I’m all ready to go, Arthur~” He said happily, taking his cousin’s arm. Arthur fought back a smile, his cousin was so...air headed. He led his cousin down to the party. He wanted this to be over soon, he had plans for a tea party with his fairy friends and they didn’t like when people cancelled. No one else could know about this though, it’d ruin his reputation. He was very tough, but he still had his soft side that only the fairies got to see. He swore that no one else would ever get to see it. He led his strange cousin down stairs to the party. He looked around. He didn’t see anyone that he could talk to very well. No one really liked him around here. They all thought he was just a crazy thug. He kind of wished he could find
someone that would understand him, like Lovino did. Even if he did run off with the tomato boy, he had someone. He sighed as he glanced around the room. A bunch of his family and family friends all having fun and dancing. He noticed a pair of blue eyes on him and his cousin. His heart leapt in his chest. His stomach felt like butterflies were fluttering in it. It was like he was wrapped in a cocoon, that no one could break. That is until his cousin started speaking.
“Arthur~ Will you get me something to drink?” Arthur frowned at the loss of this new feeling but went to go get him something to drink. He sighed. He hoped he could find the owner of those blue eyes, those beautiful blue eyes.
Alfred had gotten dragged to the party. He sighed as he watched Gilbert run off to go dance with anyone that would dance. Of course Gilbert would do that. He searched for his cousin Matthew. He had gotten dragged off by that one servant that had invited them. Alfred chuckled. His parents would murder one of them if they brought a Capulet home, much less one of their servants. He actually didn’t know why he hated the Capulets. His father just told him that they were enemies.
He scanned the crowd for Kiku, his love. He pasted over many other faces, some familiar, some he’d never seen before. He’d felt his heart jump as he saw some one else...well, two someone elses. One was a beautiful woman that he had never seen. She wore a gown of red with a matching mask. The other seemed to be escorting the lovely woman. He was a man that seemed to be only a little bit taller then the girl. He wasn’t too bad looking either. He felt his heart thump in his chest. This was love! Who was Kiku again, some old maid perhaps? Who cared anymore? He had to speak to this girl! He had to!
He made his way over to his new love, preparing a heart winning speech. On his way his eyes met the man that was with her. He suddenly forgot how to breathe. His head got scrambled, how to walk? What was talking? He looked into those jade eyes and felt like he never had before. His stomach rumbled, his heart flipped, his pulse quickened. He was under a spell, on that was only broken by his new angel’s voice.
“Ve~ I’m thirsty...” Wow...deeper voice much. Um...so his love was a guy. Ok, he liked guys better anyway! The green eyed guy sighed and walked away. Alfred felt his stomach calm down. That was strange. He brushed it off and went to try to talk to the one in a dress. A true beauty! He went and tapped him on the shoulder.
“Hello, beautiful~” he said trying to be cool. The guy made a strange sound.
“Who are you? ~” Alfred smiled hugely.
“Who am I?” He asked, laughing, “I am the most awesome Alf-“he was cut off by the green eyed man coming back.
“Here.” He said, shoving a drink into the brunette’s hand. He made that strange noise again before running off with a quest to find his parents. Great...he’d just have to find him later! He went to leave when he caught the man’s eyes again. He felt breathless again. He brushed it off as a late reaction to the other one. He went to ask who the beauty was, but the other man had left. Well fine! He’d just follow him home then! That’d show the world. He would get to keep this new love! He swore it!
Not the best. Ok, so Next chapter everything changes from the book. Though Most plot points will stay the same. The 'balcony' part, the Fight (which is already written), an exhile. The only part I'm not sure about is the end. There are four possible endings for this thing. I am unsure on what to do with this though. I'd like your oppinion though.
Out of the 6 'main' characters, five died. The six main for this story would be: Romeo (America), Juliet (Italy), Tybalt (Iggy), Mercuito (Prussia), Benvolio (Canada), and Paris (Germy). In the orginal story only one of them lived. In my re-write I accendently made it so two of them couldn't really die. I took out the reason for their death. I would like to know what kind of ending you would like.
It could be as close as I can get it to the orignal. The two that don't die will be unhappy, but living.
It could be an acutal happy ending.
I could have four characters live, and they could be happy or unhappy.
I could blow up the whole city and everyone dies.
Do you guys want a happy ending or a sad one like the orignal play? I can't decide because I want to write the happy one, as I don't normally do that. But I'd feel like I was betraying the original play (Though, I am mucking it up already.)
So, next chapter up soon. Have a good day and what not.
Rating: PG-PG-13
Characters/Parrings: America, England, Canada, Italy, Prussia, Germany, most nations in smaller roles (Real names used)
Summary: (Hetalia) The story of forbidden love between two teens from rival families.
Wooo! Another chapter after so long. The bad thing is this is basically random fliller stuff. That's kinda why it took so long. It's sadly important stuff. Also, Next chapter is when is when I basically throw the book to the wall and say "Well, time to fuck up the plot!".
I don't own anything, bla, bla, bla.
Alfred and Matthew had eventually found Gilbert. The three were now sitting in Gilbert’s room, just lounging around until the party. Gilbert had, for some reason, pinned up a picture of Roderich, a noble related to the Capulets. The picture had some knives stuck out of it. When Alfred and Matthew saw that one laughed and one rolled his eyes. Gilbert just shrugged as if it was normal. He grabbed a knife off his nightstand and threw it at the picture, hitting it in the eye. After this small exchange Alfred jumped onto his bed and spread himself out on it. Prussia laughed and sat on the messy floor. Matthew just rolled his eyes and took an overturned chair from the floor. They started talking about everything and anything that came to mind.
“So, Gilbert, where’s your brother....Ludwig?” Alfred asked as he tossed a small ball he found on the floor at Gilbert. Gilbert caught it and threw it back.
“Off at the Capulets,” he sighed.
“Why?” Alfred asked as if this was the worst offence ever.
“HK wants to marry him off to their son,” He said. Matthew raised an eyebrow.
“Shouldn’t he be trying to marry you off? You ARE older...”
“Matthew Montague,” Alfred looked at him, horrified. “How could you suggest that our best friend marry a...a...Capulet,” he asked as if it was the worst thing ever. Matthew sighed,
“Well...it makes since. He IS older, even if he doesn’t act like it all the time.”
“But still! Capulet’s Matt, you know how evil they are!” Matthew went to answer back, but Gilbert butt in.
“I told HK I didn’t want to marry into the Capulet family,” He said, “He didn’t take it well at all. We had a big fight and he basically said I have to get married soon, but it doesn’t have to be to a Capulet.” Alfred looked at him strangely.
“You? Married? Some how that just seems odd...” Gilbert nodded. He really didn’t have any desire to get married to some random person picked out for him. Really, his uncle never married, and he didn’t get yelled at or anything. Alfred seemed to realize something,
“My parents aren’t going to be happy about this when they find out.”
“Why do they care?”
“Just think, Gil. The Capulets and your family are going to be all ‘buddy-buddy’ because of this. My parents are going to wonder why they didn’t choose OUR family.” Matthew nodded,
“Uncle Ivan won’t stand for it...he’ll want to find a way to connect mine and Alfred’s family to yours too.” Alfred looked at Gilbert,
“Your uncle is probably going to make YOU marry into the Montague family...” he said, “That’s the only thing that I can think of...then both the Montague and Capulet families will have connections.” Gilbert wrinkled his nose,
“I’d rather not marry you, Alfred.” He said. Alfred stuck his tongue out at Gilbert,
“There ARE more Montagues. It’s not like it’s gonna be me or Matt,” he said. Matt didn’t know what it was...but he didn’t like the thought of Gilbert marrying into his family. It just seemed...wrong, Gilbert really only ‘looked’ right by Alfred and himself. He wasn’t sure why, but the idea of Alfred and Gilbert together like that made him sick to his stomach. It must have been because then he would be forgotten by the two...yes, that must have been it. He wished for a subject change...anything to make this all over.
Apparently Alfred thought the same as he pointed to a sword by the door and commented on it.
“Nice sword, have I seen that one before?” Gilbert scoffed. Trust Alfred to start on weapons.
“Nope, I just got it!” He said, as he jumped up and picked it up. “Super sharp and all that too,” Alfred jumped over and the two discussed weapons. Matt rolled his eyes. Those two were such thugs sometimes, but none the less, he walked over and went to talk about Gilbert’s new sword.
Feliciano had gotten ready for the ball. He decided to dress as a girl, he rather liked dresses. He was
going to wear one of his nurse’s older ones. He twirled around his room, he felt so pretty in his dress~. It was red, with green swirls along the bottom, almost like an upside down tomato. He put on the half mask that went with it. He looked in the mirror again. It was such a pretty dress~ but he didn’t want to wear it to some party where his parents were trying to make him fall in love! That wasn’t fair...they didn’t make Lovino do that! He sighed, he probably wouldn’t fall for this...Ludwig anyways. He danced around his room a bit more, pretending to dance with someone. He giggled as he turned, pretending a guy was leading him in a dance. He then heard a cough from his door way. He turned to see his cousin, Arthur, at the door. He too had on a mask, his in green though.
“Arthur!” He said happily, “Did you come to get me for the party?” Arthur nodded,
“Yes, Feliciano, I did...now come on. Your parents are waiting for us.” He said. Not to mention his parents, and lots of guests. Feliciano made his signature ‘Ve~’ noise and went to his cousin’s side.
“I’m all ready to go, Arthur~” He said happily, taking his cousin’s arm. Arthur fought back a smile, his cousin was so...air headed. He led his cousin down to the party. He wanted this to be over soon, he had plans for a tea party with his fairy friends and they didn’t like when people cancelled. No one else could know about this though, it’d ruin his reputation. He was very tough, but he still had his soft side that only the fairies got to see. He swore that no one else would ever get to see it. He led his strange cousin down stairs to the party. He looked around. He didn’t see anyone that he could talk to very well. No one really liked him around here. They all thought he was just a crazy thug. He kind of wished he could find
someone that would understand him, like Lovino did. Even if he did run off with the tomato boy, he had someone. He sighed as he glanced around the room. A bunch of his family and family friends all having fun and dancing. He noticed a pair of blue eyes on him and his cousin. His heart leapt in his chest. His stomach felt like butterflies were fluttering in it. It was like he was wrapped in a cocoon, that no one could break. That is until his cousin started speaking.
“Arthur~ Will you get me something to drink?” Arthur frowned at the loss of this new feeling but went to go get him something to drink. He sighed. He hoped he could find the owner of those blue eyes, those beautiful blue eyes.
Alfred had gotten dragged to the party. He sighed as he watched Gilbert run off to go dance with anyone that would dance. Of course Gilbert would do that. He searched for his cousin Matthew. He had gotten dragged off by that one servant that had invited them. Alfred chuckled. His parents would murder one of them if they brought a Capulet home, much less one of their servants. He actually didn’t know why he hated the Capulets. His father just told him that they were enemies.
He scanned the crowd for Kiku, his love. He pasted over many other faces, some familiar, some he’d never seen before. He’d felt his heart jump as he saw some one else...well, two someone elses. One was a beautiful woman that he had never seen. She wore a gown of red with a matching mask. The other seemed to be escorting the lovely woman. He was a man that seemed to be only a little bit taller then the girl. He wasn’t too bad looking either. He felt his heart thump in his chest. This was love! Who was Kiku again, some old maid perhaps? Who cared anymore? He had to speak to this girl! He had to!
He made his way over to his new love, preparing a heart winning speech. On his way his eyes met the man that was with her. He suddenly forgot how to breathe. His head got scrambled, how to walk? What was talking? He looked into those jade eyes and felt like he never had before. His stomach rumbled, his heart flipped, his pulse quickened. He was under a spell, on that was only broken by his new angel’s voice.
“Ve~ I’m thirsty...” Wow...deeper voice much. Um...so his love was a guy. Ok, he liked guys better anyway! The green eyed guy sighed and walked away. Alfred felt his stomach calm down. That was strange. He brushed it off and went to try to talk to the one in a dress. A true beauty! He went and tapped him on the shoulder.
“Hello, beautiful~” he said trying to be cool. The guy made a strange sound.
“Who are you? ~” Alfred smiled hugely.
“Who am I?” He asked, laughing, “I am the most awesome Alf-“he was cut off by the green eyed man coming back.
“Here.” He said, shoving a drink into the brunette’s hand. He made that strange noise again before running off with a quest to find his parents. Great...he’d just have to find him later! He went to leave when he caught the man’s eyes again. He felt breathless again. He brushed it off as a late reaction to the other one. He went to ask who the beauty was, but the other man had left. Well fine! He’d just follow him home then! That’d show the world. He would get to keep this new love! He swore it!
Not the best. Ok, so Next chapter everything changes from the book. Though Most plot points will stay the same. The 'balcony' part, the Fight (which is already written), an exhile. The only part I'm not sure about is the end. There are four possible endings for this thing. I am unsure on what to do with this though. I'd like your oppinion though.
Out of the 6 'main' characters, five died. The six main for this story would be: Romeo (America), Juliet (Italy), Tybalt (Iggy), Mercuito (Prussia), Benvolio (Canada), and Paris (Germy). In the orginal story only one of them lived. In my re-write I accendently made it so two of them couldn't really die. I took out the reason for their death. I would like to know what kind of ending you would like.
It could be as close as I can get it to the orignal. The two that don't die will be unhappy, but living.
It could be an acutal happy ending.
I could have four characters live, and they could be happy or unhappy.
I could blow up the whole city and everyone dies.
Do you guys want a happy ending or a sad one like the orignal play? I can't decide because I want to write the happy one, as I don't normally do that. But I'd feel like I was betraying the original play (Though, I am mucking it up already.)
So, next chapter up soon. Have a good day and what not.