FIC: In a Mirror, Darkly: Chapter 20/?
Title: In a Mirror, Darkly: Chapter 20
Author: Valerie Vancollie (valeriev84 [at] hotmail.com)
Characters: Don, Charlie, Alan, David, Colby, Nikki, (surprise)
Rating: 15
Summary: There was a certain irony to the situation, that the brother who was a federal agent had been abducted to be used as leverage against the brother who was an applied ( Read more... )
Comments 19
Now you know the circumstances leading up to the fourth photo and how it was taken. We are now also quickly approaching the point in time at which Part IV ended and this part will go a bit further than it, but not by much.
The surprise character listed will soon be revealed and we are rapidly reaching the main climax of the fic. In fact, the next chapter takes us to Thursday and the start of the time sequence which will stretch across the last three chapters of Part V (if it doesn't grow longer on me yet again).
Slowly but surely we're getting there!
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I just realized that I forgot to make mention of the fact that almost everyone will be surprised by how Don gets out of the basement. At least based on the comments/questions I get in reviews.
There seems to be an underlying assumption that's incorrect.
:)
I kinda like it as that means I'll get to surprise everyone!
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The description was so vivid and angsty and so very very very good...
I've to admit that I first had a second of naughty thoughts when I had the mental image of semi- nekkid Don and handcuffs *not wearing them, I know, but still...* and was then... You know, fetish clubb and all... Dirty thoughts...
But that was until the next line and then it got all angsty and involving and lovely and just amaaaaaaaaaaaazing!!!
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:D
Why am I so, completely, totally not surprised at where your thoughts went?
And #$^$%^$!!!! I just realized a major inconsistency in this chapter. I changed something last minute and didn't realize the consequences of it.
*head-desk*^100
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This fic is food for the soul, everything about it is just perfection :)
And of course my thoughts went there, in a way... I'm still affected to some extent by Friday's events :P
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And if Friday is still on your mind, write a fic about it! Quick, before it goes. If you don't want Don to be visiting there voluntarily, then put him there on a crime scene or, even better, undercover!
Here, bunny, bunny, bunnies. Me got carrots and dandelions and all kinds of yummies.
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