FIC: In a Mirror, Darkly: Chapter 20/?

[valeriev84]

Title: In a Mirror, Darkly: Chapter 20
Author: Valerie Vancollie (valeriev84 [at] hotmail.com)
Characters: Don, Charlie, Alan, David, Colby, Nikki, (surprise)
Rating: 15
Summary: There was a certain irony to the situation, that the brother who was a federal agent had been abducted to be used as leverage against the brother who was an applied

Comments

[loozy]

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek!!!

The description was so vivid and angsty and so very very very good...

I've to admit that I first had a second of naughty thoughts when I had the mental image of semi- nekkid Don and handcuffs *not wearing them, I know, but still...* and was then... You know, fetish clubb and all... Dirty thoughts...

But that was until the next line and then it got all angsty and involving and lovely and just amaaaaaaaaaaaazing!!!

[valeriev84]

Lol, of course you'd love eeek!! stuff.
:D

Why am I so, completely, totally not surprised at where your thoughts went?

And #$^$%^$!!!! I just realized a major inconsistency in this chapter. I changed something last minute and didn't realize the consequences of it.

*head-desk*^100

[loozy]

Heh...

This fic is food for the soul, everything about it is just perfection :)

And of course my thoughts went there, in a way... I'm still affected to some extent by Friday's events :P

[valeriev84]

*blushes*

And if Friday is still on your mind, write a fic about it! Quick, before it goes. If you don't want Don to be visiting there voluntarily, then put him there on a crime scene or, even better, undercover!

Here, bunny, bunny, bunnies. Me got carrots and dandelions and all kinds of yummies.

[loozy]

Nope, no undercover... Crime scene, maybe, but not anything that he actually does or has done to him... I just cannot see him in that place, sorry :(

*munches away on carrots*

[valeriev84]

Not for long, perhaps he just needs to walk in and get someone to say the right thing? You know, just long enough for something interesting to happen.

Oh!! Oh! Perhaps he could get an offer like yours! With a card! Can't you just see Megan/David/Colby/all of them chortling away at that?!

Damnit, that image is in my mind to stay now, me things.

*face-palm*

[loozy]

Oh score!!!!

This is a brilliant idea! *shnogs the stuff out of you*

[valeriev84]

*bounces about*

Does this mean a yes? Does this mean a yes? Please tell me this means you'll write it!!!

If you, you're gonna have to add an author's note explaining the circumstances leading up to it. Otherwise they're not gonna believe it!

*bounces away trying to finish chapter 23*

[loozy]

Yes!

Yes!

A thousand times yes!

[valeriev84]

Hurray!!!

With Megan there? Or set later? I supposed Liz's reaction could be interesting. Or Robin's if she's there to get a warrant as soon as they have the proof they were after.

[valeriev84]

Oh, God. Will this get back to Alan? If not, I might just have to write that scene.

Would you mind if you don't do it?

[loozy]

I was thinking Robin... Because...

Oh, I know!!!!

It can be a flashback on Ulysses which will then be told to Billy... Can you imagine his reaction? And then the two might needle Don on both that and The Kiss??? Maybe Don even has to follow up on the offer... Hm... Transparent Don...

[valeriev84]

Lol, that's brilliant! Mayhaps Alan could overhear as well? Or Alan and Charlie? Can you imagine that reaction?

[loozy]

Yes, I will...

I'll send you the rough idea via email... :) Hehe... hehehehe... I need to live out the sexual tension until The Ex *need to find a nicer name... How about The BoyToy... :D* arrives :D

[valeriev84]

Uh... somehow me thinks he'd prefer The Ex to BoyToy.

Just my thoughts.

[loozy]

Or I might just call him Simon, which is his name :P Or... Hm... The Ex, 'cuz my roomie's called Simon, too... :P