EEP! I'll admit that this was pretty dark for me. Yes, I'm a big sap at heart. LOL I read it though because I adore your writing style and I'm glad I did! I LOVED Jack at the end. That completely saved me from sliding off my chair into a big pile of depression.
I loved this part: “Will you?” There was a hint of surprise in Slade’s voice because the Doctor was walking toward the blue box again. He could accept that it might be a means of transport, but while two people might squeeze in there it would be nearly impossible to get inside with a dead body to carry. Yet the Doctor did not slow down when he pushed the doors open and disappeared inside, and for one second Rickston thought he saw a room inside that was dimly lit and much, much bigger than the outside.The TARDIS is definitely bigger on the inside! Plenty of room for Jack and the Doctor to comfort each other
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Oho, thanks for all the praise! I didn't like this story at all but according to the feedback I recieved it was worth delaying the next chapter of 'Shade' for. A short h/c sequel will follow someday.
I agree. There are some haertbreakingly beautiful stories out there that recieved about six comments (four of them comming from me) and some pretty crappy ones that got hundrets of comments.
Remember, if I update my story you'll have to update yours.
I swear, I barely blinked while reading the second part. It's so awful to read and I feel so sorry for the Doctor, but it's also compelling and... guh. Love it.
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I loved this part: “Will you?” There was a hint of surprise in Slade’s voice because the Doctor was walking toward the blue box again. He could accept that it might be a means of transport, but while two people might squeeze in there it would be nearly impossible to get inside with a dead body to carry. Yet the Doctor did not slow down when he pushed the doors open and disappeared inside, and for one second Rickston thought he saw a room inside that was dimly lit and much, much bigger than the outside.The TARDIS is definitely bigger on the inside! Plenty of room for Jack and the Doctor to comfort each other ( ... )
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A short h/c sequel will follow someday.
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Now back to the next chapter of Shade... That is one I've been waiting for!
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Remember, if I update my story you'll have to update yours.
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*dies*
*regenerates*
Guh.
I love you.
*struggles for coherency*
Wow.
Can we have a sequel?
Please? Please? Please?
One with Jack waking up and anger and protectiveness and angst? Wonderful, wonderful, angst?
Please?
I've missed reading your stuff, and this, this was absolutely brilliant! :D
I need more.
Please? :)
*peers at you hopefully*
Marvellous (hothothot) stuff! :D
*mems dizzily*
*g*
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I wanted Jack to get his hands on Slade, damn him.
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...any chance of a sequel?
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