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Beginnings - EVER (9/15)

May 21, 2011 15:49

Title - Beginnings - EVER (9/15)
Author - unwritten_ideas
Beta - write_my_dreams
Rating - eventual NC-17, this part PG-13Word Count - 4,801 (69,000ish total ( Read more... )

character : chacha, rating : nc-17, pairing : gackt x you, story : beginnings, rating : pg-13, character : gackt, character : junji, character : chirolyn, character : you

Comments 21

love_teddies May 21 2011, 14:07:26 UTC

its getting better
you its so obvious that you love him. just admit it

unwritten_ideas May 22 2011, 13:06:41 UTC

Yes, You! Listen to this advice, haha.

Thanks!

nihon_hamano May 21 2011, 16:43:12 UTC

"The feelings that had bought him to the brink of tears --" *nudgenudge*

Your insight to the characters is lovely. Feels so damn real that it made me really feel sad and angry that G worked himself so hard to collapse in Germany, and I already cursed him if he does that again this summer...

unwritten_ideas May 22 2011, 13:08:09 UTC

AGH. Changed.

It's an even crazier schedule this year, isn't it? I can't see how they'll all make it through.

Thanks!

gabba_camui May 21 2011, 18:41:54 UTC

¬¬U YOU don´t lie to us, you are soooo in love of him *sighs*

As always great chapter!! Junji and Chacha are so nice here XD
This story is now one of my favorites~
*hugs*

unwritten_ideas May 22 2011, 13:08:38 UTC

I love Jun-ji and Chacha. I love writing them too!

Thank you!

ann456 May 21 2011, 21:31:37 UTC

Another great chapter thankyou so much!!!

unwritten_ideas May 22 2011, 13:09:04 UTC

Thanks for reading!

mind_cell May 21 2011, 23:01:11 UTC

Another great chapter, indeed ( ... )

unwritten_ideas May 22 2011, 13:16:24 UTC

Too much emotive description can have the effect of removing the emotions from what is happening sometimes, I think. I also think that the readers can find that emotion themselves.

I haven't read that fic that you linked to. I haven't read much FFVII fiction at all other than some set around Crisis Core (hmm... SOLDIERS XD)

Well, You always stands on the right hand side of Gackt on stage and Chacha is on his left. It would have been really strange and unnatural for them to have been the other way around, right? And fan accounts of the fall said that it happened. Put the two together and you get it right!

Hahaha, thanks,

mind_cell May 22 2011, 13:44:42 UTC

I have always been a Zack girl, and i haven't come across many good Genesis-centred fics, but The Mission by Ardwynna Morrigu is a TOTAL SOLDIER WIN XD (here - http://ardwynna-m.livejournal.com/tag/fic%3A%20the%20mission) It's Seph/Gen/Angeal centred and it's hot and funny and sad at the same time. Genesis is so naturally Gacktish there! =P Give it a try if you have time.

unwritten_ideas May 23 2011, 16:47:29 UTC

Ahh, Genesis has become a caricature as the years have passed I think. His only purpose in most fiction seems to be as the perpetually horny, slighty effeminate SOLDIER in high heeled boots. And that's fun in a little fluff piece, but after reading it so many times I abandoned reading Crisis Core stuff altogether. What a waste of a character that could be so much more interesting!

I remember reading the first few parts but it was bout the time I fell out with Crisis Core fandom and I don't think I have the willpower to read it all now!

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