119. FANFIC: "Damage Control"

Sep 28, 2012 10:51

Title: Damage Control
Fandom: EXO
Pairing/Characters: kaixing / kailay; OT6-K plus Luhan and Lay
Genre: Humor and a bit of mushy romance
Rating: PG-13 for some slight swearing and mentions of sexy timez
Words: ~5000
Summary: The K members have a sleepover in their living room for a little group powwow so that Joonmyun can deal with his leader complex; ( Read more... )

k-pop, k-pop: exo - kailay, k-pop: exo, creative writing: fanfiction

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antrea September 29 2012, 01:18:44 UTC
Ok so I'm still stuck on a cross county sleepover meet thing so I'm on my cell phone still which is a less than optimal way to reply lol.
But anyway I was like grinning like an idiot ever since the first paragraph, like the characterizations are so good and lmao Suho, what a hard knock life the whole time he was like WAIT, YOU GUYS ARE ALL IN RELATIONSHIPS?!?! lmao. And my god the whole thing with Baekhyun hands and manicure kit god I can actually really picture that and of course Kai choosing the unicorn sleeping bag but that line "THAT WASN'T EVEN MY SUITCASE" omg I was loling so hard people were looking at me like I was nuts.
And Kai's texts to Yixing WHYYY SO ADORABLE and god they were all teasing him and it was so perfect because it was just like the Sina video sniff sniff
And YIXING that dumb TROLL I am still crying over Kai's reaction with Lay's texts and everyone passing around his cell phone and reading those dirty texts and they were taking bets oh Jesus this fic was just so amazing I'm probably going to read it over on an actual computer this needs some kind of sequel ●ω●

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unfinishedwing September 29 2012, 01:46:30 UTC
LMAO Annie you could have waited until after your sleepover (omg funny coincidence haha) to comment again!

I make fun of Suho too much lololololol. Hopefully in real life he is not as clueless of a leader as he is in this fic lmao.

Kai said in the Sina interview that the pink polka dot suitcase was a staff member's and he was just helping her out BUT I refuse to believe it. He probably has that pink polka dot suitcase hidden in the back of his closet hahahaha. And Baekhyun's pretty, graceful hands make me mad because I don't have hands like his >:[ lol. Also Baekhyun is climbing up my bias list /cries

YOU KNOW LAY CAN'T RESIST TROLLING. It's how he shows his love.

Sequel?! Gurrrrl, you are never going to be satisfied, are you. lol.

Edit: This fic would not have existed without you so thank you for your brilliant, hilarious thoughts ♥

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antrea September 30 2012, 00:36:50 UTC
LOL I JUST REALIZED THAT COINCIDENCE OMG HEHEHE But yeah I just had to get my feelings out I couldn't wait until I came back but now I'm back for good yay

omg poor Suho tries so hard. I actually think in real life he should know more about their relationships but at the same time he'll do all sorts of "let's bond and talk about our feelings" activities like these XD I can just imagine at the M camp like Kris is all like don't bother me and everyone goes around doing whatever they want in a civil-ish manner but as for K they try to do that but Suho is always corralling them into feeling circles or sth hehehe

SAME I DON'T BELIEVE IT EITHER. I THINK IT WAS JUST AN EXCUSE SO HE CAN COVER UP HIS SECRET GIRLY STREAK!!!! Steph omg your Baekhyun tags are getting more hilarious by the day but yeah the same exact thing happened to me with Baekhyun he is just too perfect and cute and his smile and eyeliner and whatever anyway he's going to leap up a lot of spots on your bias list, trust me.

HEHEHEHE AND I LOVE HOW LAY ACTS SO INNOCENT IN THE PHONE CALL AND HE HAS KAI WRAPPED UP AROUND HIS LITTLE FINGER UGH POOR KAI XD

ok you don't have to write a sequel because I would be working you too hard lmao. My thoughts aren't all that brilliant!!! This was basically all you lol and the Sina interview :D

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unfinishedwing September 30 2012, 15:43:49 UTC
ANNIE, YOUR ICON. are you trying to kill me jeez.

Yeah, I definitely think Suho would be much more aware of the ongoings among the members in real life. I just could not resist making him the clueless leader in this fic though. In the M dorm, Lay or Tao (bb panda has too many feels, they have to be let out lol) would probably be the one orchestrating the Feelings Circle if they ever wanted one because Duizhang sure as heck isn't doing it lol.

BAEKHYUN HAS ALREADY LEAPED UP SPOTS ON MY BIAS LIST. THERE'S NO MORE ROOOOOOM. He's in 6th place now, which doesn't sound very high BUT IT IS considering there's Kai, Kris, Lay, Chanyeol, and Chen before him. Baekhyun has a tough battle ahead of him lol what am I even saying

lol yes poor Kai. But idk, I think we should say 'poor Lay' too because when Kai finds out that he's been trolled........... I fear for Lay's safety. And also 'poor Baekhyun' since he was in on it XD

Credit is given where credit is due~ and you were the one who came up with the premise! haha. And I saw your reply to my tumblr post "still the best thing I've ever read" GURL DON'T LIE my serious!kaixing fics are definitely better than this, not to mention other fic writers ;___;

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