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now you're really living (peter/claire, heroes)

Nov 27, 2007 17:25

Title: Now You’re Really Living
Author: missaliceblue
Pairing: Peter/Claire.
Rating: PG to be safe. Mostly canon.
Status: Completed one-shot. 3500 words
Summary: Claire misses Peter. A whole lot. Angst and fluff for iamlillykane’s birthday.

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fandom: heroes, pairing: peter/claire

Comments 39

last_archangel November 28 2007, 00:42:57 UTC

Beautiful story.

sinverguenza December 1 2007, 00:42:56 UTC

thank you!

tju_tju_tju_tju November 28 2007, 00:55:05 UTC

Oh, this was so lovely. I absolutely loved it. I really liked your use of second person; not a lot of people are able to write that well, so props for that. I loved the mention of the mean, evil writer also. XD Fantastic job, as always.

All you got was a knowing look and the reassurance, “Don’t worry dear; he’s your uncle and always will be.” Ha. That had to sting.

sinverguenza December 1 2007, 00:43:40 UTC

thanks :) ive never written in 2nd person before, and i thought it would be an interesting exercise.

moonlitpines November 28 2007, 00:59:48 UTC

Oh, I *loved* this. You get inside Claire's head so well, it's uncanny ( ... )

sinverguenza December 1 2007, 00:45:50 UTC

haha, isnt sandra nice? though i must admit i kind of want her to die jsut so claire will finally - finally be sent to the petrellis. *sigh*

lol. youre too nice to me. thank you so much for your kind review, honestly.

and your tangent is totally spot on in my point of view. pasdar too. lets hope they get back to that next season. if there is a next one. geez. can you imagine that we might have to go another 9 months before an episode after monday night?

moonlitpines December 1 2007, 00:50:04 UTC

I refuse to think of it until after Christmas when the rush is over and there's nothing to sit down in front of...like, at all.

I'm envisioning a positive outcome. Ohmmmm.

And hoping like hell.

shimmeree November 28 2007, 01:10:22 UTC

*squeak*

Lovely.

sinverguenza December 1 2007, 00:45:59 UTC

thanks!

iamlillykane November 28 2007, 01:19:49 UTC

OMG, this was simply wonderful. ♥ :D SIGH. SO WONDERFUL.

His memory is sketchy and there’s a possibility that you weren’t significant enough for his brain to retain

OMG, STING.

but those last two paragraphs were lovely and fluffy. :) angst and fluff, just the way i like it. :D thank you so much. Simply wonderful. don't worry about the lateness, love. this was worth the wait! ♥ ♥

sinverguenza December 1 2007, 00:46:32 UTC

aw i am glad that you liked this. i was going to write smut and then remembered that you didnt care for it. lol. happy birthday (late) again!