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[undrscoredom2nd]

Title: Wherein John Realizes that, Yes, Sherlock Does Too.
Fanart or Fanfic: Fanfic
Characters: John, Sherlock
Prompt: Beginnings
Word Count: 650-ish
Spoilers: Could be considered a tiny spoiler for ASiP
Rating: PG for kisses
Summary: John can't say when his feelings began. But, he can say when They happened.
Author's Notes: Written for sherlock100. Cross posted at sherlockbbc.

Comments

[undrscoredom2nd]

wtheck, late reply is late! Replying anyway because I was so certain I'd replied to thank you but I haven't yet so--

Cutting off this ramble to say, thank you! :D

[undrscoredom2nd]

Thank you! *hands you a jumper for the cold days* I am jumping for joy and also doing fist pumps because getting John's voice wrong was something I was afraid of

[halftime1030]

Quite lovely - I love John's thought process here and I think you've got this voice down perfectly :)

[undrscoredom2nd]

Thank you, that's quite a compliment!

[kozibot]

The last paragraph is WONDERFUL <3

Thank you for sharing this. It was fantastic!

[undrscoredom2nd]

Don't thank me, I should be doing the thanking :D

Thanks!

[jack_regan]

Very lovely!

One minor point, football doesn't have quarters, only halves.

[undrscoredom2nd]

Thanks!

Damn, I didn't notice that :'D I got used to basketball, thanks for pointing that out!

[mresundance]

This was really sweet and I want to know more about how this situation develops.

On the last paragraph - 'stained' doesn't seem right. Stained has negative connotations, simply because a stain, usually, is something bad you can't wash out. :) I would change that.

[undrscoredom2nd]

Thank you!

And you know the rest :'D