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HHYL FanFic - Chapters 1 - 12 as PDF

Feb 02, 2016 16:13

Hi there,

I uploaded the current status of the Fanfic as a PDF to mediafire.

You can download it here:

Edit: Link is now friends only (look at comments section and next entry)

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Really Curious shilindra February 7 2016, 07:24:52 UTC

Ok so at 1st I thought that Huy Thien was the one who tried to kill Lu Cang when he was small and also killed his mother so that he can become king
Because it was described as Lu Cang got chill till his bone when he saw Huy Thien for the 1st time
But know Huy Thien wants Lu Cang to be KING .....???😨😨
So now m really curious about who tried to kill Lu Cang and why does Huy Thien wants him to be the KING
Really looking forward for d next update

RE: Really Curious shilindra February 7 2016, 18:19:16 UTC

How can this story goes on? The story line was based on lu Cang being an innocent and now he got rape by someone. What next and an orgy with everyone in the kingdom? I think this has taken too far. It's is suppose to be love story between Jing and lu Cang. Leave it that way. The rape scene shouldn't even be in it. They were traveling and lu Cang was drugged. There are no reason for that scene to be in there. This story line is so far of the mark to the point of disgusting.

RE: Really Curious chica_dominican February 9 2016, 00:32:50 UTC

I think people have to be more careful of the way they express their opinion. Ulli-blu is trying to entertaining us with this FF, and I personally think we owe her/him respect for the effort and the time spwn

RE: Really Curious chica_dominican February 9 2016, 00:36:02 UTC

*spent

RE: Really Curious ulli_blu February 11 2016, 11:05:25 UTC

In my eyes, Lu Cang was never an innocent, and at least the main hhyl story not really a love story (Stockholm Syndrome, anyone?). I find it funny that you find the rape scene disgusting, while almost the whole hhyl is built upon rape... Don't get me wrong, I like the story anyway, or else I wouldn't write a fanfic. But just like the violence Jing used to conquer Lu Cang, the violence of Huy Thien serves a purpose: To literally take full possession of Lu Cang, and to sever the ties with Jing, knowing very well that Lu Cang now feels like there is no way back to Jing. Throughout history, rape has always been part of showing superiority over others, to make the victim feel even more disheartened, small and powerless. That's why I decided to add the scene.
it's absolutely ok if you say you don't like the fic, but I admit, the way you do it, is not my cup of tea, politely said.

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