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ulli_blu

HHYL FanFic - Chapters 1 - 12 as PDF

Feb 02, 2016 16:13

Hi there,

I uploaded the current status of the Fanfic as a PDF to mediafire.

You can download it here:

Edit: Link is now friends only (look at comments section and next entry)

hhyl fanfic ch. 1-12 download link, hhyl fanfic, hhyl

Comments 14

cookingpan February 3 2016, 13:50:20 UTC

Thank you for PDFs-ing the your story it makes reading so much easier. Yay!

ulli_blu February 4 2016, 16:37:03 UTC

You`re welcome :-)

Really Curious shilindra February 7 2016, 07:24:52 UTC

Ok so at 1st I thought that Huy Thien was the one who tried to kill Lu Cang when he was small and also killed his mother so that he can become king
Because it was described as Lu Cang got chill till his bone when he saw Huy Thien for the 1st time
But know Huy Thien wants Lu Cang to be KING .....???😨😨
So now m really curious about who tried to kill Lu Cang and why does Huy Thien wants him to be the KING
Really looking forward for d next update

RE: Really Curious shilindra February 7 2016, 18:19:16 UTC

How can this story goes on? The story line was based on lu Cang being an innocent and now he got rape by someone. What next and an orgy with everyone in the kingdom? I think this has taken too far. It's is suppose to be love story between Jing and lu Cang. Leave it that way. The rape scene shouldn't even be in it. They were traveling and lu Cang was drugged. There are no reason for that scene to be in there. This story line is so far of the mark to the point of disgusting.

RE: Really Curious chica_dominican February 9 2016, 00:32:50 UTC

I think people have to be more careful of the way they express their opinion. Ulli-blu is trying to entertaining us with this FF, and I personally think we owe her/him respect for the effort and the time spwn

RE: Really Curious chica_dominican February 9 2016, 00:36:02 UTC

*spent

Thread 5

anonymous February 7 2016, 18:11:15 UTC

What a stupid story... Lu Cang got rape by some one else. You could of written that part out and not make it a part of the story.

chica_dominican February 9 2016, 00:46:09 UTC

You don't have to be mean just because you don't like the story. Go somewhere else to find a FF or story to your liking.

Really, what a hateful person!

ulli_blu February 11 2016, 10:45:32 UTC

I'm all in for constructive criticism, but trolling is just blah.

anonymous February 11 2016, 10:19:40 UTC

im with anonymas and really curious comments

anonymous February 11 2016, 13:30:37 UTC

whole story is nice but problem with huy thien plz mk hm disappear and chang chapter 11 and 12 scenes other is best line

and best of luck in your journey

ulli_blu February 12 2016, 10:20:48 UTC

Hi, I know that ch. 11 is not everybody's cup of tea, but it's necessary for the following chapters , so I can't and won't change it, sorry...