will you bring you back to me?

Sep 19, 2009 19:42

cry wolf
yunho&jaejoong;
pg, au, romance

for konnistique (must i have a reason? ♥)

notes: i'm really not good at giving one liners to describe
the summary of the fic. mianhe~ btw there's sound in this,
remember to lower your volume so the music doesnt blast!

and then there was yunho; )

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GAS WHO? u_knowiloveyou September 19 2009, 12:34:12 UTC
for konnistique

you ain't forgotten me have you, bb dear? :) i haven't been able to talk to you for awhile. sorry sorry shawty shawty!~ scrambled this together at work during free time while thinking of something i could do for you to show my love will always remain; no matter the distance or time that separates. heart talk :DD♥ `Hh Ee Aa Rr Tt baby!

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Re: GAS WHO? konnistique September 19 2009, 14:18:58 UTC
Forget you? Seriously, forget you? Who are you trying to kid? :| Gods, look at thisthisthis. This, you--are exactly the person who kept me in your thoughts even when we're worlds apart. I just, can't believe you'll keep me in your thoughts (your heart) deep enough to spend your precious time writing, dedicating beautiful prose for me ♥ ;~~~; why you do this to me (my heart) everytime, is beyond me foreverrrr .__.

This piece, Sheryl, ohmygod. It's so significant. I don't know what you were really thinking when you wrote it, but how I see it-- what I really see is us. :O Me being the closed off Jaejoong, with too much to hide and too little people to hold my heart out to, and wonderfulwonderful Yunho being you, alskjdlj the one to pull Jae out from the dark and mend his heart back together and hold him for promises of one year from now, ten years from now; forever but more importantly, tomorrow ;~~~~~;

But this line right here made my heart go alsdkjalkjsdlajsdjalsexplode--'I thought, Jaejoong replies, I thought I’d like to buy time.' ( ... )

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yeobosayunho September 19 2009, 14:39:18 UTC
bb you are so special to me, yes? and always one of the ones who will be in my heart forever&always. no kidding :DD when i wrote it, i never expected that this would be portraying us. but now that i read it after our lil chat, i feel like omo! how apt~~ i guess everything really happens for a reason, like why i wrote it like this? XD

i'd be glad to be your yunho anytime bb; my pleasure. and you be jaejoong with his beautiful, quiet heart that treasures friendship so wonderfully :))♥ thinking that we can be friends as long as forever; ahh how nice! C: i am here for you okay? idk how many times i'm gonna mention that but if you need anything, just anything at all, i be around. if i'm your one in a million, you'll be my one in six billion then~ truefact! >DD

{steals candy} I♥YOU

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hana_kiree September 19 2009, 14:05:44 UTC
Aaaahhh... a good choice for the accompanying song. Made the whole reading more..soulful~ Sweet take on the cliche love story plot, bb... but u always write them in ur own way, that I tend to forget they're overused in the 2st place ^^

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hana_kiree September 19 2009, 14:06:01 UTC
*1st place

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yeobosayunho September 19 2009, 14:15:20 UTC
yepp it was good inspiration for the story :)))v i've been bery unoriginal these few days. but all's good if you think they aren't overused! XD thank you sweetheart~~♥ &lovelobe;

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jaehero September 19 2009, 15:16:40 UTC
I always love your works! this is another great piece of art from you! With the lack of yunjae recently, lots of people gave up on them, but I'm glad you didn't! Thank you for still keeping the love for them so strongly!

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yeobosayunho September 19 2009, 15:21:44 UTC
thank you so much! i always believe if one person can continue loving, that love can encourage others to continue believing too yessu? :))

bb you made me search up the lyrics to survivor cos i was thinking on the lines of how one heart can change the world and tada::

With one smile
you find a heart (shine on me)
Two smiles
that we can join (shine on you)
Shine like the world does
Smile, smile
Survive, survivor!

such lovely lyrics from a group that wishes for the fans to always keep the faith~~♥

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quixoticfox September 19 2009, 15:23:56 UTC
This was entirely lovely, but you must get that alot(I've read some of your other fics and gahh they were heart-wrenching and painful in all the right places)

"He had saved jars and jars of money. From birth, he says, because he’d seen it coming.
But for? Yunho inquires, guessing traveling, holidays, fun.
I thought, Jaejoong replies, I thought I’d like to buy time."

This really got to me. As did this :

"‘If you knew it was gonna break my heart, why’d you tell me?’ Jaejoong demands, although he hadn’t been in love, hadn’t nearly been close enough.
Was it an accusation? Or an implication?
Yunho sighs audibly, a long, drawn out confession.
‘Because Jaejoongah, I’ll be here to help you put it back.’"

and this:

"You should leave before anything happens.
How brave of you, Jaejoongah,
to ask this of me with that look in your eyes."

I loved how guarded yet fragile Jaejoong was in this, and how Yunho was just so Yunho.

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yeobosayunho September 19 2009, 15:29:09 UTC
{sways at the quotes} ♥

thank you sweetie! you're too kind to me ;=; (ahh, i've always wanted to write so that people will feel happy or sad for all the right reasons. tysm it means alot what you've said :))

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pavarian September 19 2009, 16:04:54 UTC
LOVED this fic. maybe not so much the slight bittersweet undertones. But beautiful.

My fave line was that one with jae keeping jars of money to buy time. Beautiful.

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yeobosayunho September 19 2009, 16:08:36 UTC
ikr there was some slight angst LOLLipop!

i have a soft spot for that line too, bb. thaaank you many kamoxiah! :)

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