Comments | txorakeriak: fic: Impossible Is Nothing (Federico Fazio/Javier Pastore, PG)

txorakeriak

fic: Impossible Is Nothing (Federico Fazio/Javier Pastore, PG)

Aug 24, 2010 17:31

Title: Impossible Is Nothing
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Football RPS
Pairing: Federico Fazio/Javier Pastore
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this all up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very probably didn't happen. No payment involved, no offence intended. This is for my ( Read more... )

.football, player: pastore, #fanfiction, player: fazio

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ibythetide August 24 2010, 16:56:35 UTC

There must be a law against such sudden progress.

not at all! not when it gets javier such a wonderful invitation. not when he receives soft kisses and warm smiles. would it be impolite to ask for more? please?

txorakeriak August 25 2010, 20:27:21 UTC

Hee, I agree completely. XD (And I'm sure that Javier does, too.)

More about these two? I'm not sure because I hardly know anything about them, and it's a pretty random pairing too because as far as I know they haven't even played together on the national team. But if another bunny hops along, I won't kick it away! ;)

still_glorious August 24 2010, 17:00:35 UTC

Awww, due to the craziness i completely missed this at footballverse. Which has me hitting my head as I would have voted. Javier!!!! awwww!! Love, love, love!
Setting was great, idea was great and Federico downright lovable. This is quite an interesting pairing.

txorakeriak August 25 2010, 20:27:31 UTC

Oh, don't worry about it. Glad you liked the fic! I have no clue about either of them, to be honest, so I'm glad my characterizations worked for you! :)

still_glorious August 25 2010, 21:34:02 UTC

Ever since the world cup i love javier. Which is why i chose him to be in the chaptered fic as the second half of the pairing :) He's adorable!!

kitty69lover August 24 2010, 17:31:12 UTC

oh my god, i read this pretty much the next day after the Supercopa first leg where i first saw Fazio and fell in lurrrve <3 and i've been loving Pastore since december ahah

pairing like made for my taste.

brilliant <3 very sweet, very very sweet.

txorakeriak August 25 2010, 20:27:44 UTC

YAY, glad you like it! Pastore is great, and Fazio seems really hot from what I've seen, so when I found out that the prompt allowed this pairing, I had to write it. :D

dfotw August 24 2010, 17:32:33 UTC

Javier is aware that he needs to say something if he doesn't want Federico to think he's a mute or a sociopath or anything like that, but his head feels like a desert: nothing but heat for miles and miles.

In the end, he figures that unless he undergoes brain surgery, or at least a Repartee 101 course, he'll never manage to make someone as perfect as Federico interested in him.

Thank goodness I'm alone in the flat because I totally went 'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW' out loud at these lines! XDDD

What a lovely, sweet fic! Love it, like everything else you write!

:)

txorakeriak August 25 2010, 20:27:56 UTC

Aww, so glad you enjoyed! :D Isn't Pastore adorable? XD Well, at least he gives me that impression from what I've seen of him so far. :)

*big huggles* It is such an honour to have such loyal readers as you. I appreciate that lots and lots. :)

just_jenni August 24 2010, 23:14:30 UTC

OMG I freaking LOVE the banner you made!!!!!!!!!!! MADE OF WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!♥♥♥

Oh, and before I get started THANK YOU SO MUCH for the nice things you said about my 'Lucas Barrios' fic! LMAO. Unfortunately (I think I told you) I wrote TWO separate, longer fics and when I realized with horror it was supposed to be ONE fic I had to chop it down by a third! (And to me it reads kind of choppy. I FAIL! LOL.) But the FUNNIEST part was when San said you guys had SEEN BARRIOS at the airport AND I ALMOST DIED BECAUSE I HAD JUST WRITTEN SLASHFIC ABOUT HIM AND THE STORY STARTS WITH HIM IN THE AIRPORT BY HIMSELF WHEN HE RUNS INTO CHICHARITO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) I just felt so O_O over that!!!! ROFL ( ... )

just_jenni August 24 2010, 23:16:35 UTC

WTF...I accidentally left on the italics code...*facepalm*. Sorry. :(

I am made of fail today! *headdesek*

txorakeriak August 25 2010, 20:39:13 UTC

I'm so glad you liked the banner! I wanted to have one for this fic because the players aren't that well-known, but my manipping skills are rather poor so I spent hours on this (and the shadow on Javier's face drove me insane)...

Here's the big version, in case you're interested:

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just_jenni August 25 2010, 21:51:06 UTC

I can't believe it didn't seem choppy! It did to me but that's probably because I know what I cut out! ;)

Anyway, thank you! *hugs*

YES! The characterizations really worked! Sweet, shy little Javier and big, sexy Federico Fazio...yum.

Awww...well, I'm not planning to go anywhere soon. :) *hugs*

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