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Not A V-Day Ficathon Fic: "Needles And Pins", Chapter 4

Feb 22, 2006 02:04

Greetings yet again, fellow Harry/Cedric shippers, and welcome to the fourth and final chapter of "Needles And Pins"! Yes, dear ones, I have braved the wilds of Arizona and survived, laboring away at my lonely keyboard and cursing the slowness of my father-in-law's dialup connection to bring this storyarc to a satisfying close. Thanks, again, to ( Read more... )

fanfiction: novella, adult-rated fanfiction, author: seven_of_velvet

Comments 36

ladifantasia February 22 2006, 13:36:20 UTC

LooooOOOOOOVVVEEE it! I adore secret relationships. Hopefully you are planning to write an epilouge with Harry and Cedric "coming out". Cant wait to see the professors' faces and the rest of the students' reaction. Not to mention Sirius'rants when his godson have an underage sexual relationship. It is waaay to bad that Cedric was killed when he way too cute.

seven_of_velvet February 23 2006, 19:53:44 UTC

Thanks for the LooooOOOOOOVVVEEE!!! *squees* And I love secret relationships too. There MAY be a sequel to Needles And Pins, but Harry and Cedric will almost certainly be keeping this relationship a secret. I think Harry (my Harry, anyway) is naturally a secretive sort of person in general, and for him, having a sexual relationship with another boy, especially this boy, during this year, would be a BIG secret. And I think Cedric is too much of a gentleman, too grownup, too Hufflepuff, and too concerned about Harry's feelings to go blabbing to anyone about what's going on between them. (In case you hadn't noticed, Cedric's very fond of Harry, perhaps more than he's willing to admit to anyone except himself.)

And yes, Cedric was, to use a popular phrase, 'too brave, too beautiful, too briefly'. *tears up*

--Seven

annella February 22 2006, 14:08:43 UTC

That was wonderful - so sweet and loving and HOT! I loved every chapter of it. :)

christwise February 22 2006, 16:27:09 UTC

Well good morning to me.

You really picked up right where the last chapter left off didn't you? Nice.

The whole thing was pretty hot and I enjoyed reading it.

On the Afro Celt Sound System thing: I liked a few songs from Anatomic, the newest cd, it came out in the fall. It's more mellow but "Sene" and "Drake" are beautiful. And I would love to hear Seacht if yousendit isn't a problem... heh.

A song from Further in Time? Hmmm... "Persistence of Memory"? For Cedric? Sniffle?

Well, it's been lovely talking and reading all things musical and slashy. See you around.

seven_of_velvet February 23 2006, 19:36:17 UTC

Thanks, and I hope it was a VERY good morning to you! (I liked the quote emmagrant01 used to have at the top of her LJ: "I love the smell of porn in the morning!") Yes, each chapter starts up precisely where the last one left off, because I actually didn't write this as a chaptered story, but as one long continuous work - some 15,800 words' worth. I broke it up because I knew LJ would choke on a single post of that size, and because I was only about half-finished when Valentine's Day rolled around, and I really wanted to post the first part on that day.

I'll listen to a few samples from Anatomic & see what I think of it. And no, 'Persistence of Memory' wasn't the one I chose. Hint: It's one of the songs (with actual lyrics) rather than an instrumental. That narrows your choice down to three or four, I believe!

Sorry, I misquoted the title of that Iarla O'Lionaird album. It's The Seven Steps To Mercy; Seacht is the first track on the album, and I believe it's the Irish Gaelic word for 'seven', which is where my cornfusion may have ( ... )

mara_202 February 22 2006, 17:05:52 UTC

SQUEEEEE!!! Brilliant chapter! Too bad that it's the last one... *sniff*

I really liked reading your fic. ^^

*bounce!* mikki_rosie February 22 2006, 17:39:15 UTC

oh, Bravo! that was wonderful. i've been waiting to see how you'd do the actual sex scene, and i must say, i'm really impressed! it's amazing.

"Two points from Slytherin." that really takes the cake, that does.
i always liked stories that included harry's... um.. more wicked side. you blended it perfectly into a beautiful, and HOT scene!

well done!

mikki

Re: *bounce!* seven_of_velvet February 23 2006, 21:05:45 UTC

Thank you so much! This was the first time I've really writton pr0n, and if I say so myself, I'm pretty damn happy with the way it turned out. Of course, I've had LOTS of inspiration, courtesy of my favorite Potter, Tolkien and Pirates fanfic writers. *loves on them all*

I have a huge kink for dom!Harry, especially in combination with sub!Cedric, and most especially as they were written in Rhysenn's brilliant 5-parter, 'A Season In December'. *pimps* (If dom!Harry is your kink, too, there's a blisteringly hot Harry/Ron/Draco story by Aspen on pornish_pixies called The Princess And The Panties. *pimps some more*

I actually hadn't been intending to write Needles And Pins in the same sort of vein, and as I sat down, determined to write the sex scene, I really wasn't sure what was going to happen between them. Harry's 'wicked but brilliant plan' sprang fully-formed into my head just as it did into his. From that point, I wrote about a page and a half in, like, twenty minutes. Which is really fast for me. So, if it turned out hot, well - ( ... )