FIC: Matter of Time - TutixNagayan - PG

[innusiq]

Title: Matter of Time
Author: Innusiq
Rating: PG - totally work safe
Pairing(s): TutixNagayan
Summary: First Date
Notes: I originally planned on participating in the 30_dates challenge community, but instead decided to just use the prompts and work at my own pace.

Comments

[kooriyoukai]

It was funny, I was sitting here going, "My god, I can't believe no one's replied to this wonderful fic yet! What's wrong with everyone?" and then it clicked that actually the majority of people who would have commented are currently over at our apartment and not on the computer XD;;

So yes, I looooove this fic! The description of Nagayan's appearance was adorable, creative, and highly accurate I have to say. Every layer was easy to visualize and I enjoyed having that vision of him all bundled up in mismatched layers and knowing that he manages to pull off something like that. And the restaurant scene, guh *__* *wibbles* Tuti blushing had me dying, and I loved how you presented it as being such a subtle but sweet thing. His smiles, his laughter, you got everything spot on and it all felt so right. I really enjoyed it for that level of realism that you gave it ^_^

Excellent job really, I'm looking forward eagerly to what else you might be writing for the prompts :D

[innusiq]

*phew* Have you ever written something and you read, and read and read it and end up sitting there thinking, I'm not even sure about this? Well, that was me with this one. I think it was the way I approached writing this time around that felt different in some way... not really sure why.

So here is much thanks for reading, and appreciation for commenting! Seriously, it's tremendously encouraging receiving confirmation that I've some how captured the essence of the people I am writing about, especially when I have about 29 more pieces to write...

And really, how lucky are you that you can even have a gathering of more than one person who knows what you are talking about when you say Tuti or Nagayan? The answer is very lucky :)

Thanks again!

[molkita]

Such an amazing fic~!
Poor Tuti was all shy about the date! xD And Nagayan, being Nagayan, couldn't help but tease him a bit more!
I really can imagine their first date being just like that! ^^
Thank you very much for sharing this with us!

[innusiq]

Thank You very much for reading and especially commenting. Feedback is so appreciated, especially when I've got 29 more dates to write about... oh dear.

Again, thank you, thank you, thank you!

[molkita]

29 more dates?!

Now, that sounds interesting! xD

[analineblue]

GUH. *___* I really, REALLY loved this. I love the idea of Tuti not even being able to really ask for the date, and them both just kind of ending up on it anyway, and I love Nagayan ordering the most expensive thing on the menu, and just... Yeah. I really loved everything about this fic. :D I also liked Nagayan's really abrupt, "Explain" too. XD XD Anyway, great job. I'm so glad you're writing them. ♥ *memories* ♥

[innusiq]

Thank you so much for commenting! It's encouraging to hear that ideas and images I have for a story are being equally enjoyed by others. These two are really too cute to leave alone, aren't they? Especially when they are the number one fuel keeping the TutixNagayan fire going.

Again, thank you.

[hibimaosuki]

I'd like to be more coherent, but it's 12:30 on a Thursday morning and I have to be waking up in five hours to go to class, so I'll just say here that aadfoasudf09a0pf8poausfpi THIS IS AMAZING AND YOU REALLY HAVE TALENT AND I'M GLAD YOU MADE THIS BECAUSE YOU ARE ONE AMAZING WRITER.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but are you one of those who didn't start writing until KY started posting the challenges? If you are, then I would like to take this opportunity to say that I am oh-so-jealous because you've been writing for TxN for a FAR SHORTER time than I have, and yet your fics are way better than mine. ^^; *gets down on knees and worships you*

[innusiq]

I'm just going to start this off by saying I literally don't know what to say. I'm grinning like a Cheshire cat because you've made me happy. I'm blushing like a fool because that is just my general reaction to compliments. My knees are knocking because now I'm freaking out about even attempting another TxN fic. *takes deep breath*

*takes another deep breath*

THIS IS AMAZING AND YOU REALLY HAVE TALENT AND I'M GLAD YOU MADE THIS BECAUSE YOU ARE ONE AMAZING WRITER.

Truly, truly, truly thank you for this. I can't say I agree to the extent of amazing, because there are far more amazing writers out there (and we are our own worst critic), but I do thank you. Thank you for reading my little fic and thank you for taking a moment to comment. It's encouraging to hear what I've written is being enjoyed.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but are you one of those who didn't start writing until KY started posting the challenges?You would be pretty much right. I was a little behind when I stumbled into PoT and then TeniMyu and THEN TxN. I've

[ch_ar_me]

Obviously, this comment is WAAAAY late! I don't know why I missed this when you first posted this at the comm!! the horrors of internship, totally taking up my time I only came by this from the the link in the second chapter.

Anyway, this story is so much LOVE. I had this big grin on my face the whole time, and I was squeeing, and fangirling, and all waii!!! and GAH *wibbles*

"Kind of like a date," Takashi repeats, teasing. "But not a real date?"

Tuti's eyes widen and the color drains from his face. "No! No, no, this is a date, a real date."

"Good, because if that's the case, there is no way I am paying for dinner tonight," Takashi replies, and smiles sweetly before looking back down at the menu in front of him.I can just SEE that! My head was actually making references on how Kikumaru had trouble with his 2 kouhai always leeching on him for free meals. haha

[innusiq]

Hey, it's not a late comment at all. It's nice receiving feedback after the fact. Puts a smile on my face to know it's still enjoyed.

Thank you for reading and taking a moment to comment. I've been kind of lost my inspiration to write in general over the last three months due to RL, but after a) obtaining Nagayan's On and Off and b) viewing the Bleach Live... I found a little inspiration.

I really have enjoyed this pairing terribly... probably too much... ah well. My goal is to write through the remaining 28 or so prompts. Each may not encompass an actual date, but they will (hopefully) all be connected.

Again, thank you :)