Medium - Chapter 19

Feb 13, 2007 21:37

Title: Medium (Part 19/??)
Author: kaitou_marron
Warnings/Rating: None, worksafe.
Pairing: TutixNagayan
Summary: AU. Tuti is still acting, while Nagayan’s life decisions have turned him on the road of art rather than entertainment…

Previously on Medium, the aftermath of the kiss at the bar confuses Tuti and drives Nagayan into isolation...

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audny_albatross February 14 2007, 03:33:43 UTC
Kime! AWEOIFHSLKDGJLKSHGSADJF';SADLJFL;SKDFHOWIH

*starts breathing again* Okay. This was all kinds of amazing. And I'd tell you every part that was amazing, but. Kime. And angst. And Kime. And the cute little Kaori. And Kime to the rescue and Kime being evil and threatening and it's so awesome.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

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kaitou_marron February 14 2007, 23:58:48 UTC
Ah, that's what we need Kime for -- moving the plot forward. =)

I love your icon. <3 Black's position in the corner closest to the front looks a little better. [/completely random] XD;;;

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audny_albatross February 16 2007, 00:45:46 UTC
Thanks! I stole it from the top image on Wikipedia. ^^;;; Black's position does look a little better, but white looks like it might have some nice aji. I really wish I knew what game this is, or if it's even a professional game. It would be interesting to see how that corner is later resolved. ^^;

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scribblefish February 14 2007, 03:35:59 UTC
I feel like such a bad person because i'm totally picking this up right here on this chapter, but i HAVE to comment.
So good! So inticing! I'm definetally reading more!

You made Kimeru such a badass. He is the definition of a true friend, and I love how dedicated he is to his friend's happiness

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kaitou_marron February 15 2007, 00:01:03 UTC
I'm glad that you decided to read. Nyya, I know that there's always something a little foreboding about a long fic, but I'm glad you liked this chapter enough to go back and read the rest.

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renji_fan1185 February 14 2007, 05:26:56 UTC
Update! <3

that ending...really was awesome.

"'You don’t even know where I live!' Tuti protested, panic rising in his voice.

'Oh, I know, Tsuchiya-kun. Believe me; I have my ways. You’ll be seeing me tonight.'"

I absolutely adore it. I got stuck on that Kime-ness right there. Now how will Tuti deal with the pressure?

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kaitou_marron February 15 2007, 00:08:19 UTC
Everyone seems to like the Kime part, a lot more than I imagined. Jamie commented on it when she was betaing, too. I guess I was just sort of shocked at the fact ...

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shy_violette February 14 2007, 05:38:10 UTC
Squeeee!

Okay. Deep breath. *breathe breathe breathe*

I love this story. And I read through this with such riveted attention my eyes started to sting, and even as I was pushing to make it to the end, and see where we were headed, I still read every word- and for me, that's a feat in itself.

And Kimeru IS badass- but the best part about it is, he is badass with motivation. Badass with purpose. Your characterization of him is amazing- as well done as both of our main boys, and it's a pleasure to see.

A friend of mine always says, "Angst is only good if it leads to WAFF- Warm and Fuzzy Feelings." The way the last chapter left us hanging was so-- intense, for lack of a better word... but I get the sense, from the direction this chapter was taking, that it's going to be so worth it in the end.

Mahvelous! ^___^

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kaitou_marron February 15 2007, 00:22:41 UTC
*gives you eyedrops* I don't want your eyes to sting, lol.

Thanks for the compliments, and you are right ... things are headed for some sort of resolve with waff. As this story is drama/angst, any guesses as to how long it will last?? ^__________^

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subetehoshi February 14 2007, 06:08:18 UTC
I know I've said this before but...:
DEAR GOD I LOVE YOUR KIME!

You have NO IDEA how HAPPY I am to see a new and shiny kirakira chapter from you! YAYYYYY!

Is it weird for me to read a lot slower than I usually do because I NEVER wanted this chapter to end? WHY!?! WHY DID IT HAVE TO END!?! *tears* XD

But in all seriousness, this chapter was just...absolutely amazing...as always. I love Tuti's dejection, Nagayan's depression, and Kime's determination (haha, 3 "D"s)...and I noticed how Tuti failed to mention the vomit incident after the fated kiss to Kime...like it was unimportant and didn't affect his feelings towards Nagayan at all...ACK! That was just SO BEAUTIFUL! I don't know if you meant it that way, but man...incredible!

I can't wait to see what Kime has planned for our (unsuspecting?) Tuti...I know that no matter what he does, it shall be ALL GOOD.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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kaitou_marron February 15 2007, 00:26:15 UTC
Aww, thanks. The Kime, the Kime. Nyyyya, I have to make up for what Kime has planned for Tuti. The way I ended up ending this chapter wasn't how I originally planned it. It seems like everyone likes this, so, I guess I made the right decision to change it. =) YOOOOSHAAAAA! I needs to get more writing juices flowing.

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