In Need of Vid Beta

[turquoisetumult]

SECOND REQUEST! PLEASE HELP.

I need a vid beta for my festivids submission. The vid is all ready and I'm looking for a technical beta more than anything else.
(However, if you know the fandom, I'd more than happy accept constructive crit on scene selections too.)

Any volunteers. I'd really appreciate it! (The vid is about 3 minutes long, fyi.)

Thanks in advance.