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ROUND TWO

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Fill: The Competition [Part V] anonymous January 15 2011, 01:26:22 UTC

Straightening up, Jarvis cleaned off the substance with his fingers only to wipe it on the other program’s chest. He prompted his suit to code back over his bare pelvis then stared at Rinzler. It was fantastic to see his competition sprawled out on Clu’s ottoman covered in expelled system fluids. Yet, it was such a shame to have to erase this experience from Rinzler’s disk; Jarvis knew the other program wouldn’t hesitate to tell who did it, even if he had to explain the how and why as well. He knew exactly whose side Clu would take.

The officer didn’t give any commands, seeing as Rinzler really couldn’t willingly budge, but he did roll the program onto his side to remove the identity disk. With a few swift movements, Jarvis had deleted everything up to the point when Clu left him. After replacing the disk, Jarvis patted Rinzler’s cheek and left the room with a sense of overwhelming satisfaction.

No one outside the room had noticed him leave. After two stretches of corridors, Jarvis saw Clu and his system froze. When Clu was closer, the officer had gained some composure.

“Greetings, Clu,” Jarvis addressed as evenly as he could.

Clu didn’t give any signs of acknowledging him. This time, Jarvis didn’t mind.

Re: Fill: The Competition [Part V] anonymous January 15 2011, 03:23:27 UTC

Not OP thinks this one is wonderful. Thanks.

Re: Fill: The Competition [Part V] anonymous January 15 2011, 03:41:40 UTC

Omg anon, that was perfect! Thank you! Its exactly what I wanted. Jarvis was so wonderfully evil >:) this totally made my day <3

Re: Fill: The Competition [Part V] anonymous January 15 2011, 04:35:56 UTC

I'm glad you liked it :]

Re: Fill: The Competition [Part V] anonymous January 15 2011, 14:56:59 UTC

Very much so! I love how you made Jarvis so detached and akward. It was spot on! Thanks again

Re: Fill: The Competition [Part V] anonymous January 15 2011, 16:40:56 UTC

Jarvis was honestly my favorite character. He is so...appealing in some way. I think his overall dorkiness got to me. I had a good time writing him.

Re: Fill: The Competition [Part V] anonymous January 16 2011, 00:14:08 UTC

I'm going to be really cheeky and say I hope you're planning on filling out more prompts with Jarvis in them :3

Re: Fill: The Competition [Part V] anonymous January 16 2011, 05:09:33 UTC

;)

Re: Fill: The Competition [Part V] anonymous January 15 2011, 03:47:15 UTC

Nicely done, I really like it

Re: Fill: The Competition [Part V] anonymous January 15 2011, 12:18:06 UTC

Nnnghh yes, this was a prompt I really wanted to see filled and it didn't disappoint. Anon, please have my firstborn. <3

Re: Fill: The Competition [Part V] anonymous January 15 2011, 14:51:07 UTC

Awesome much? XDD

Re: Fill: The Competition [Part V] anonymous January 16 2011, 12:19:37 UTC

fuckk, anon. this was very hot.

Re: Fill: The Competition [Part V] Sequel Please!!! anonymous January 16 2011, 13:13:49 UTC

Please pleeeease, I want a sequel. I want more Rinzler abuse, maybe next time Jarvis won't have enough time to erase Rinzlers identity disk but to his utter relief Rinzler's too ashamed to tell? This fill is way too good not to have a sequel! PLEASE!

Anon anonymous January 16 2011, 16:07:27 UTC

Oh dear...Well, I will think about it. Your many pleas make it hard not to want to. Any more plot-like/situational ideas for a sequel that you would like me to consider?

Re: Anon anonymous January 16 2011, 19:49:43 UTC

* He develops a fixation on Rinzlers ass
* When Jarvis erased Rinzlers identity disc it triggered something in him to make Jarvis' hands feel familiar and causes him to actually want Jarvis' touch. Glitch? Confused!Rinzler
* They talk about how much they hate eachother during it
* Spanking
* Jarvis forces Rinzler to beg for his cock
* Rinzler licks Jarvis clean
* Rinzler is disgusted in himself afterwards which pleases Jarvis to no end
* Clu finds out that Rinzlers been with someone else but he refuses to tell who so he's punished
* Rinzlers cries of anguish is music to Jarvis' ears

Add, subtract. I'm not picky, I think I speak for everyone when I say please Anon just make sequel happen!

Anon anonymous January 18 2011, 13:01:33 UTC

I like your ideas. I will definitely think on it, but I am currently juggling many other things (including another Jarvis/Rinzler prompt!). If I do end up writing it, then it will take a few days. So I hope you're patient.

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